我的又一期有氧读写课程昨天结课了，这两周密集地发生了和读写有关的活动，先是受到北京教育学院的邀请，给各区英语教研员和英语骨干教师做了一场有关讲授读写课程的讲座，周五还给景山远洋分校的英语教师做了类似的讲座，老师们都是从事初高中英语教学，但是看到我给他们展示的小学生通过十期有氧读写课程完成的英语叙事文，他们感到难以置信。就是这句话，孩子们的潜力是无限的，我们要做的就是信任他们，并且给他们这个平台。

    下面是本期有氧读写课程最终作品集收集的孩子们的叙事文。除一名初一学生外，其他全部为小学4~6年级的学生。作品多数为孩子们的第三稿，前两稿是在我带着孩子们分析课程读本的故事写作手法的基础上完成的，我给他们的第一稿做过反馈，这个第三稿基本是孩子们的原版作品。本课程使用的Writingroadmap我设定在了美国本土小学3~4年级的衡量标准，比这些孩子低了一个年级段，但要知道，这个标准可是为英语是母语的孩子们设定的，对于我们这些英语是外语的孩子们来说，能够和这个年级段的美国孩子PK，还是很了不起的。

Chen X

A Magic Thing

Many people don’t believe that there is sorcery on earth. They think that is only magic. But I found something very absurd.
One year ago, I met somebody on the street who talked to me," This mobile phone can take you to any time! 100 dollars each!" After a long time bargain, I got the phone with one yuan! First, I wanted to go 207 AD. I wanted to help prime minister Zhuge. I told him not to let Masu get into Jieting; and not to let Guanyu keep Jingzhou. So now I was the prime minister of Shu. Zhuge retired! I assisted the emperor to manage his army. Oh, I was busy!
Three months ago, I wanted to go somewhere that didn't exist. "I want to go to the dynasty of Tsing" I said to the phone loudly. Suddenly, I saw a green dragon, a white tiger, a red bird and a black ugly turtle."I am NOT an UGLY TURTLE!" The "turtle" said angrily."Maybe …Em …Let me think…. Oh! I know! You are the basalt! Aren't you? Wow! I can talk to monsters!" "WE ARE NOT MONSTERS!" "Ok, ok, four spirit beasts. Don't be angry! Peace first! Telephone! Take me to 2012!" I was safe! After that time, I never wanted to see those four ugly animals.
“It's time for school. I have a great idea! I'll go to the future and see the test paper. Isn’t it a good idea?

Li T

Dinosaur Attack

It was a deep night. A meteor flew though the sky and made a fire. Then it landed somewhere.
Later that day, I got up too late to arrive at school on time, so I took a short cut beside the pond. While I was running around the pond, a sparked, beautiful, sleek stone attracted me. What a beautiful stone! I soon picked it up and kept running to my school as fast as I could. Finally, I arrived at my school just in time as the first class had just started. The first class was science class. I was absent-minded because I was thinking about what that stone was. Was it some kind of rare stone that could sell for a big sum of money? Or some giant animal which had died out million years ago... "Please answer this question, Justin," shouted by a friendly voice. It interrupted my thinking. I was a little bit angry. But I am sure I can't answer this question so I told him the truth. My teacher loved stones too. He was very interested in the stones. So he promised to do a research. I just felt horror when I sent the stone to him...
Two months later, an explosion which was louder than ever broked our school's peace. Just within a second, half of our school suddenly collapsed. We rushed into the lab through the emergency entrance. Our lab's control room was locked. A fearful green light was glittering behind the door. Suddenly, the door opened. A tremendous, ugly T-Rex was in our school's basement! Run! We rushed out of the lab. At that time, the police had arrived. I discovered that the stone which I had found two months ago, was the soul of the evil T-Rex. We used all weapons we could use. But they didn't work. Our headmaster let us hide in the secret room. The T-Rex came closer and closer...
Suddenly, I thought about the magic ring which I found many months ago. I climbed out of the room and showed the ring to the T-Rex. "Please send the dinosaur to the ancient times and rebuild our school!" I shouted as loud as I could. In a second, our school returned to normal.
Our school turned to normal and left this experience in our brain forever...

Li Y

Dinosaur Attack

The dinosaur was Adam's favorite and it was nearly all his life. He had books, clothes, and toys that were all about dinosaur. What's more, a big, crazy secret grew up in his innermost being... He wanted to have a real dinosaur!
The Math class was boring. Adam was dreaming of his own dinosaur attentively, "It must be very young and docile," he thought seriously for a while, "and with yellow skin.""What did you say? " laughed Jenny, his classmate. "Oh, nothing." Adam's mind had already come back. He then looked out of the window. "Dang!" The earth was shaking. Just then, Adam saw a big foot stamp on the playground. Adam opened his mouth surprisingly; he was too shocked to speak. It was the dinosaur in his dream!
All at once, Adam ran outside as quickly as he could. "He is crazy!" shouted Michel angrily. "Let us kills that horrible dinosaur!" Suddenly, everyone was trying to kill the dinosaur but it couldn't feel a bit pain at all. The dinosaur was eating leaves with great relish under an old tree. Adam gave it some leaves and it smiled at Adam friendly. "He smiled at me just then!" cried Adam excitedly. After a few minutes, Jenny stopped killing and walked to the dinosaur gingerly. The other children did the same. They soon became good friends with the dinosaur. The children made a beautiful garland for the dinosaur and the dinosaur let them climb onto his back. They were singing and dancing together around the dinosaur. They all developed deep friendship. They were just like a warm family. It was the best time they had ever been before. When they were enjoying the time, Mr. Forest, the biology teacher, told them a surprising thing that they couldn't believe. The dinosaur was from the Dinosaur Planet! It came to the earth accidently by a magic hole under an old, mysterious tree. Mr. Forest also told them that the dinosaur must come back to his home before the sunset so they had to prepare fast. A few minutes later, they had already made a leave carpet outside the hole. Everything was already.
In the end, they kissed their friend and said "goodbye" to the dinosaur. It was time for it to go back. Some girls were so sad that they cried and cried. Finally, it walked on to the magic carpet slowly. The dinosaur suddenly spoke, "Bye, Adam! Bye, everyone!" Then, it vanished in the hole. From that day, the school had a new name, "A friend of a dinosaur".

Li YB

Dinosaur Attack

It was playtime. While all students were playing in the playground at school, suddenly a tremendous monster stepped in. When I saw it clearly, I was too shocked to speak. It was a dinosaur! I was very surprised and very scared. All at once many students ran away quickly.
At this time the dinosaur was chasing us. Being so frightened, I was frozen at that time. I had to stare at the dinosaur that was standing there. The huge dinosaur was very strange and scary. It had a long tail, sharp teeth, sharp claws, two lamp-like eyes and four legs like tree trunks. I felt that the dinosaur must look me up and down as if it could eat me. Fortunately, my classmate Tim held my hand and ran outside together as fast as we could. Tim said to me, panting, "Do not be scared!" However, the dinosaur ran much faster than us. Tim and I had to run faster that we were soon tired. So the distance between us became closer, closer and closer. I closed my eyes desperately, and waited for the dinosaur to give me a strong hit. But after a long time there was no sound at all. As soon as I opened my eyes questionably, to my surprise, the dinosaur began to speak in a quiet voice, "I do not mean to do any harm to you, (run-on) I only want you to be my only friend! " I was shocked. I had never heard that the dinosaur could speak English. I said in a friendly way, "OK! No problem!" and I asked it, "What is your name?" "You can call me John!" answered the dinosaur happily. And it said , "I am a dinosaur from ancient time!" "Let us check with my science teacher how to deal with you." So I took the dinosaur to my science teacher. When my science teacher saw it, he was trembling out of fear. He said to me angrily, "Mark! Tim! Where do you get it? You need to give it back!" I said to my science teacher, "This dinosaur was very friendly to us. It does not eat us! So you do not need to be very terrified." "Well, Really? OK!" said my science teacher who became  very supportive. I beseeched to my science teacher, "Would you mind if I can keep it in our school? Maybe it is useful!" My science teacher thought for an instant and nodded his head readily. Tim and I jumped high because we were so happy. I was very excited and said to the dinosaur, "That is great! You can stay with us. And you can tell us some ancient stories and help us to study science!" "Yes, you will also be a popular star in our school!" said my classmate Tim mysteriously. Seeing that everyone was interesting in the dinosaur, I took it to our science lab. Tim and Iused to visit it at our extracurricular time every day. We had a good time there together...
suddenly, I heard my mom's voice, "Mark! Mark! Get up!" I woke up immediately. Although it took me a long time to realize it was a dream, it was such an adventurous experience. I knew the dinosaur’s hometown was near my school. But who else knows about this?

Liu Y

Dinosaur Attack

Tomorrow was the day for school. Peter couldn't sleep so he went outside to the farm. He saw something sparking on the top of the hill. What was it? He was a little scared but he went there. The sparked thing was a mirror with four buttons. Peter brought it to school.
At the English class Peter was so bored that he was a little absent-minded. He took out the mirror and pressed one of the buttons, and then... The mirror suddenly grew as big as a door and out came a dinosaur that was as tall as a person. The dinosaur looked cool and cruel. He had brown skin with some golden lines and two long paws. The dinosaur was mad at first that he ran into the classroom and made the room all a mess. The desks were all broken; the books were everywhere on the ground. Just then he saw the English words on the blackboard. He seemed to be interested in this language. Suddenly, he shouted, "Where am I and why am I here " "You just came out of this machine." Peter said. He pointed at the mirror. The dinosaur said, "It was broken just after you used it. I think I need to stay with you for a month! I am really sorry that I made your classroom mess." The dinosaur stayed with Peter and had classes with him too. He was polite and quiet. But one day things changed...
That day after Peter had the sport class, seeing a red cloth flying in the sky, the dinosaur became angry and began to attack people. The sport teacher saw him and called the police. The police came very quickly. They were all surprised to see the huge dinosaur. They tried to talk with the dinosaur but it didn't work well. Then they shot at the dinosaur. The dinosaur was afraid. He ran away to the forest fast.
Every student missed the dinosaur very much and the dinosaur was very sad too. He made a phone that could call his friend. His friend went to pick him back. "I want to go to see my friends!" He cried. After three months the dinosaur was back in a time machine. He was back to see everyone in Peter's class. Everyone was happy.

Lv Y

A Magic Thing

I was tired of buying textbooks. I had many text books already. But I had to go to the bookshop to buy more. I had no idea that this shopping trip would change my life ...... forever!
It's a sunny morning. My mother, my cousin and I went to a history bookshop. We were looking for a book for ourselves. That is the first time I saw it ......
I walked to the back of the shop. I loved that book, because I loved to collect all kinds of history books. I loved history book shop. There were full of the history books and odd things. What book did I find this time?
The thing I saw was a book which looked older than the other books. It was very old and very delicate. I had never seen a book like this before.
I had no idea about what it was about. But I wondered what this book was talking about.So I knew I had to have it. Then I asked for my mother to buy it for me. But my mother said, "Oh Dear, you don't need any books. You have many of them." Can you believe this? I couldn't believe that my mother bought this book for me. After she said that ......
I spent the rest of morning reading that book, but I couldn't find any words on it. Was there a secret code? I had to try ...... so many ideas, but nothing happened!
One night, I was reading this book outside under the moonlight. Then the book began to show many words! It was a bit scary and ..... what was the story about? In fact, this book was the real story about magic and a magical word! Just like "Harry Potter", how magical! I hadn't tried any one of the magic in this book, because I thought it was not safe for me ...... Aaaaaaaah! It was dangerous!
But on the last page of the book, there was a piece of paper. There were two sentences on it: keep us secret, keep us safe! So until now this book is still lying under my bed. No one knows except you, the person who reads this story.

Jia J

A Magic Thing

One hot afternoon, I was playing with my best friend Henry. We were playing outside. All of a sudden, we found something, strange."It is a big metal pot,” said Henry. "It is big enough to boil rice for more than a hundred people." "But it does not seem to be of any use to us." “We were trying to find out how it worked but we failed. After a long time, I thought, “It is of no use.". Then, I threw bottle into the pot in frustration and sat under a tree to take a rest. After a while, when we got up to leave, I looked into the pot. I could not believe my eyes. There were one hundred bottles in the pot. “This is a magical pot. I will put this mango inside the pot and see what happens,” I thought. Then I put a mango into the pot. To our astonishment, the mango disappeared, but we found one hundred mangoes in the pot after a second "Wow" Henry said. We felt really surprised. I carried the pot to my home and kept it in a secret place so that no one would become aware of it.

Peng H

A Huge Egg

When I was having Chinese class in my school, feeling bored, I looked out of the window to see what other students were doing now. Suddenly, something dropped on the trees of our playground! I really wanted to see what it was, but my teacher would not let me go outside. A few minutes later, I got an idea! I told the teacher I wanted to go the toilet and left the class. It was cool! I ran to the playground quietly and I saw that thing. It was a huge egg which had a green shell. I could hear some noises coming out of the egg.
It was not a chicken. It was not a fish. It was not a bird. And what was it? As I was thinking about what it was, my teacher was calling me to go back for class. I was surprised and scared. I thought that maybe I needed to put it somewhere that people could not see. Then, I put it in the small forest which behind our school.
Since then, I went to the forest every day. The huge egg lived in the forest for 34 days. Until one day, I found the egg was broken. And inside the egg, there was a dinosaur! 'Wow! That was COOL!   It was taller than any animal I had ever seen. If I brought the dinosaur to the zoo, I would get a good deal of money. After that, I would be the richest people in the world!' I gasped. 'Or, maybe we can be good friends.' I said to the huge egg.
All of a sudden, I heard deafening sounds. 'Give me your phone!' 'David, is that you?' I was scared and wanted to laugh. I thought it was so funny.
When I turned back, it was the fierce dinosaur in the huge egg! 'What do you want to do?' I began to tremble. 'Give me your phone.' The dinosaur spoke again.
I gave the dinosaur my phone. ''The phone will be broken. Bye, my phone.' I thought. All at once, the dinosaur turned on a game. I had been playing that game for 3 years, but still I had reached level fifty-six. But I was not as smart as the dinosaur. One minute later, the dinosaur gave me back my phone friendly. I saw there were some English letters on the screen of my phone which made me very excited. It was 'level completed'.
Soon, the dinosaur and I became good friends. I gave him a name, Crazy. He was very helpful to me. He did many hard things which I couldn’t do by myself. For example, he could fly quickly, and if I wanted to go somewhere near or on the earth, I could call him, and he would take me everywhere I wanted to go.

Pu J

A Dinosaur Came To My School

There is a kind of people who can speak, can laugh, and can do anything just they want. This kind of people are called super angles. They live on the Earth.
Angle year 4098 some students were studying in a classroom.  (run-on) they were learning the history of the Earth.
 "If we don't have air we will be die...." the teacher of history was teaching us. Yes I'm a super angle, but I don't like history because it's boring. I looked out of the window.
"There is a kind of animal on the Earth called the dinosaur. Which animal has disappeared now? Let's look some pictures of animal (what animal?)..."
When the history teacher talked about the dinosaur, I saw a toy dinosaur! The toy dinosaur had white and black skin like a zebra. Who put a toy on the playground? But suddenly I saw the toy dinosaur move! Just then the ring started. I ran to the playground. I saw the toy dinosaur open its mouth. I was scared. The toy dinosaur fell down. Then the dinosaur got angry. It grew bigger and bigger.  The dinosaur was as big as the tallest building in the world. All the teachers and students looked out of the window. But when a man came, the dinosaur became quiet. "Sorry!" the man said. "This dinosaur is mine, and I am a scientist." Then the man disappeared. Next day, everyone forgot the dinosaur. Only I remember the dinosaur. But why? I don't know.

Wang L

Dinosaur Attack

One day, my tortoise in our pond laid an egg. No one paid attention to it, including the tortoise itself. But the coincidental thing was that our science teacher told us we would learn something about tortoise eggs. So I was pleased to see it, and picked it up. But I didn't think that was a special thing for me...
The next day, I brought it to school. At the time I took it out, I froze! A tiny dinosaur suddenly appeared in front of me! "What's the matter here? What are you holding?" asked my science teacher seriously. "I wouldn't give it to the teacher!"I thought quickly. "Nothing!" I replied, and then put the little dinosaur into my bag as fast as I could. "OK, but please be quiet!" I relaxed because that my little dinosaur would not have trouble. Then, I took it home. The thing that I couldn't believe was that it started to talk one day! It told me, "I won't eat people. I just want to have a friend. In our dinosaur world, we never love each other. We didn't know what love was. But now, I know. That's a wonderful thing." Since then, we played together, ate together, and slept together. It was very friendly. But as time went by, it began to grow bigger and bigger...until it filled my little room. The first time I thought if I should let it go. If the others knew about this, they might start to think about how to kill it! I loved my friend. I wouldn't let it die. But I didn't want it to go either.  What should I do?
After that day, I brought it to the cinema to see a movie about dinosaurs. I thought the film was wonderful, but I could not be concentrative because I was thinking about my dinosaur. Suddenly, the dinosaur ran to the screen and jumped into it! I was too shocked to speak! What was it doing? But soon, a dinosaur’s head came out of the screen. "I won't forget you forever! I love you! You told me what love is. Now I want to say, I really enjoyed the days with you!" The dinosaur yelled. "I won't forget you either!" I shouted in my best voice, "please don't go!" But the film was over. I couldn't help my tears because my best friend had gone. I hoped I could see it again. Just for once. I still have the photos for us now. They're on the wall of my room!

Wen S

Dinosaur Attack

Hi, I'm Tom. This is a story about how I met a dinosaur. Dinosaurs are a kind of animal who lived in the ancient time. But now they died. Sorry! You have to read on to find out! Good start!
It was class time. All the students were listening to the teacher carefully, but I was looking at my magic watch. Then Mr. John said, "Tom, what are you doing? Listen carefully, please." I answered with a little disappointment, "Ok, I will." Suddenly, something was walking outside! It was a dinosaur! It was three floors tall, and it had sharp teeth and a terrible face. "Ah! A dinosaur is standing on the playground!" I cried. I rushed to the playground fast. Then our headmaster picked up a sharp thing, facing the dinosaur and shouted loudly, "Don't attack the children, or I will attack you!" "Wow!" I gasped. We waited for a long time, but the dinosaur didn't hit us. Suddenly it began to speak in a very soft voice, "I don't mean to hurt you.  I don't have friends, so I feel very lonely. I just want to have a friend." I thought it was amazing! How could a dinosaur talk! "I want to be your friend. Nice to meet you!" I grinned and said in a friendly voice. The dinosaur said happily, "Thank you, nice to meet you too!" When the sun set, the dinosaur said, "I have to go back now. You can use the watch to find me. It can bring you to the ancient time, bye!" The dinosaur's voice became weaker and weaker.
If I wanted to go somewhere, I could call the dinosaur, and it would let me sit on its shoulders and take me everywhere. From then on, we become friends forever.

Wang Z

A Special Day Of My School

Maybe this is a very common day. Just like every weekday. But common days can also have special events.
It was history class which was the worst class in my opinion. The teacher always added some very boring things in the class. So I didn't like history very much. Today's class was also very boring. So I was absent-minded. Outside was a very sunny day . The playground was cleaner than any time. It seemed that our school's playground wanted to welcome someone.
"In the Jurassic Period, dinosaurs were the king of the Earth." Oh, no! Boring things again! "That world looked very peaceful. But it also had slaughters and competitions. So some dinosaurs wanted to escape from that noisy world..." Was this class for primary school students? I thought aloud to myself. It was unworthy listening! So I turned my head again to the window.
As the wind blew, a very strange thing happened. A dinosaur came to our school! At the same time, a strong feeling came to me... "Help!" By instinct, I shouted as loudly as I could. Everyone in the classroom turned to the window. "UH..." A girl squealed loudly. After that, everyone crazily rushed out of the classroom, just like wild horses. The dinosaur which was very mad shook his big and silly body strongly. It had huge eyes, an enormous body and a terrible tail. The most incredible thing, however, was that my history teacher asked me to deal with that big "monster" ! The moment I heard this from him, I even wanted to yell at him! But he disappeared as quickly as you could imagine. In a word, the girl who was forced to become a heroine was ME.
So I looked at that dinosaur seriously. And I asked myself: why did he come here? He must pass through the time! And could I let him go back to the correct time? I looked at the dinosaur again. And I found that I couldn't get any clues! I was very frustrated. And I looked at that dinosaur in the eyes. And, a miracle was born! That dinosaur, which had been crazy just now, became quiet immediately! He looked at me with gently eyes, and I could surely feel his desire to go home. "How did you get back there?" I tried to ask him. He pointed at the sky with confusing eyes. I followed his hands -- uh, I understood the message! In the sky, there was a big hole which the dinosaur left. "You jump to that hole. Maybe you can go back to your hometown!" I answered excitedly. I saw his eyes covered with joy. Then he tried to jump into it. And he succeeded.
Although I could only see the dinosaur’s back, although I didn't become the heroine, although I had not been famous, I also felt strongly a feeling for love after I help others. I was sure we both remembered this experience, forever.

Zhang Z

Dinosaur Attack

It was a very cold winter morning. I got up very early as usual. I found that it was snowing outside. I thought that I could not be late for school, so I hurried. When I went out, it snowed heavily. The world was dressed in white. It was very beautiful then. But I did not care about it. I just wanted to rush to the school.
When I came to school, the snow had stopped. But I still felt cold. I went to my classroom. However, I found that someone opened the classroom's door or the teacher forgot to lock it. When I came to my classroom, I remembered that today we had morning exercises. So I went to the playground. There was nobody on the playground. "Aha!" I heard a voice. I turned back. It was my classmate, Peter, one of my best friends. I asked him, "Why did you get up so early?" He did not answer . "Bang!" Peter and I heard a noise. We were very shocked to see about it. We wondered, what was it? Was it a big rock? Soon, a big, tall animal was standing ... on the playground! Peter and I looked at each other and we all shouted, "Dinosaur!" And we wanted to escape from this place. To my surprise, the dinosaur spoke our human language. He said very slowly, or carefully, "Hello boys! I am a dinosaur. Could I make friend with you two?" We looked at each other and we felt very shocked then. We answered, "Sure." After that, we began to introduce ourselves. “I am John. And this is...""My name is Peter." Then Peter looked at his watch. It was 7:20 am already! We said, "See you later!" to the dinosaur and went back to our classroom. Ten minutes later, many students began to go into our school. They all saw the big tall dinosaur on the playground and they told each other. After a few minutes, our headteacher Ms. Nancy knew about this and she went to the playground. She saw the scene and told the students not to stand close. However, many students did not obey her. They all wanted to make friends with the dinosaur. (I can’t understand this sentence.) Then Ms. Nancy got a great idea: to let the dinosaur live in our school. The students who were not scared by the dinosaur all thought that was a brilliant idea. Therefore, our school built a big house for the dinosaur. Later, we named the dinosaur Alex.
Alex could not adapt to the life here during the first month. Now he could let us ride on its head. On a Christmas Day, we invited Alex to our Christmas party. Alex learnt many things in our school. However one day …
It is another cold day. I went to school very early as usual. Then I went to Alex's house. Alex was not inside. I went to the basement. There was nobody either. After that, I looked in every corner of the school, but I could not find Alex. Later, Alex went out. I asked Alex, "What are you going to do?"" Go to my world." Alex said. "Hugh" a big special spaceship landed on our playground. Alex said sadly, "Bye my friend. I have to do that. I will come back one day." Soon, the spaceship closed the door. Then it got off, and just disappeared in the sky. Nobody knew if there is really a lost world just near our school.

Zhao T

Dinosaur Attack

This is a story about a huge dinosaur, my friends and me. It is the most thrilling thing I have ever experienced...forever! It was a hot summer day and everything was perfectly normal and nothing indicated that a dinosaur would appear in our school. But...
The biology class had begun. It was so boring that I was absent-minded. While I was looking outside the window, I found a big black thing behind the window. "Look, Sunny! There is a big black thing behind the window!" "Wow!" Sunny gasped. "It just looks like a big eye!" Suddenly, the black thing twinkled! We decided to go out to have a look. "Miss Yin," we said. "Shall we go to the toilet?" we asked. "Of course." She answered friendly. We ran out quickly. After we got to the playground, we found an enormous thing standing on the playground. We both froze. "Wow, a dinosaur!" we gasped. To my surprise, the huge dinosaur began to speak,"Oh, your clever guys. I'm a dinosaur who came from the ancient time." "Ancient time? But... the dinosaurs had become extinct since then!" I felt surprised again. "What..." the dinosaur was obviously even more surprised than me. "Don't you know? You will be extinct after some years..." I was interrupted by the dinosaur quickly. "I don't believe it! You must have lied to me!" it shouted angrily.  
The dinosaur began to destroy my school because of the words I had said. It shouted in a deafening voice and began to run after Sunny and me. I felt very scared. It ran so fast that we hadn't realized that the horrible dinosaur was running towards us. When we had realized the danger, the dinosaur had come towards us. It became bigger and bigger in my eyes. "HELP! HELP!" I cried in an incredibly frightening voice. We had to run as fast as we could to escape the dinosaur's terrible big mouth. Suddenly, I heard a voice calling me. It was my friend, Anna. "What's wrong with you? ...Oh, it's so terrible!" Anna hurried to us as quickly as possible. She let us run into the headmaster's room to ask for help. But... unfortunately, when we rushed into the headmaster's room, we were too shocked to speak because the headmaster... disappeared! "Where is the headmaster?" Anna asked. We felt so upset that we didn't want to see the headmaster's room anymore. We looked out of the window. Suddenly, Sunny began to scream, "Look at the hole over there!" To my surprise, a big hole appeared and the dinosaur went through it... and then, a man came out... he is our headmaster! "WOW! It's magic!" while we were talking excitedly, however, the headmaster entered the room...
What should we say to him? Would we tell him the truth? Or maybe he knew more truth than we do...

Zhou TY

Dinosaur Attack

Have you ever seen the dinosaurs? I don't think you have. But I have an experience. It is very exciting and interesting. Do you want to know about it? Okay, but....Sorry, you have to read on to find out!
It was a very dark midnight. Over 500 students were sleeping in the hostel. As usual, I couldn't fall asleep. Suddenly, seeing something sparkling, I was surprised. "What was it? Where did it come from?" I wondered. I sat up at once in order to see it clearly. WOW! There was a tremendous dinosaur on the playground! I couldn't believe my eyes. I exclaimed loudly and woke up my roommates as fast as I could. I guessed that a dinosaur might come from the ancient time. Gradually, all of the students and teachers were waken up. We were too scared to speak. The dinosaur ran to the basketball court and hit it violently. Most of the buildings were destroyed. What a mess! Then the dinosaur bellowed horribly. We tried to go to the playground tosee the dinosaur more clearly. But a lot of people were too frightened to have a try. Suddenly, a brave boy who said that he wanted to try. It was me!
The dinosaur's skin was blazing in green. Its eyes were blue like sparkling diamonds. Its tail was as long as a flagstaff. The dinosaur was as large as a big mall. I threw a large piece of meat to it bravely.
The dinosaur ate the meat quickly and felt a bit happy. But it was angry too. "What is the matter?"I asked in a little bit dismay. But the dinosaur didn't answer. Instead, it started to cry. I was very puzzled and nervous. I looked up and down the dinosaur carefully. Suddenly, I saw something sparkling."What was it?" I wondered. I came closer and closer to see it more clearly."Oh!"I saw a sharp nail on the dinosaur's toe. I tried to pull the nail out....To my surprise, I succeeded! Suddenly, a deafening sound made me scared. It was the dinosaur! The dinosaur screamed so loudly that all the people covered their ears. I wrapped the dinosaur's toe carefully. The dinosaur looked very happy and extended its huge palm to me friendly. I jumped onto the palm happily. The dinosaur raised its hand fast. I could see the whole city! It was so exciting!
Finally, all the people applauded enthusiastically. I was very proud and glad. Then, the dinosaur shook hands with me friendly. Immediately, the dinosaur disappeared. Then, my mother woke me up. Actually, it was only a dream. But it was unforgettable.

Zhou Z

Dinosaur Attack

This was a sunny afternoon. It was time for a break.
Children were playing on the playground as usual. "Do you want to know about dinosaurs?" The teacher said in an exciting voice. I was a child in this big family. I was crazy about dinosaurs. They were very cool! Could I see a dinosaur? I was very expecting. "Come with me!" The teacher shouted loudly. She took us to a quiet place. The teacher clapped her hands rhythmically. Suddenly, a colossus came down to the ground. There appeared a large shadow on the ground. It flapped its wings. Its big eyes looked at the children. The children were so afraid. They ran towards their teacher immediately. The teacher didn't seem to be afraid. "Don't be afraid." the teacher said. The children looked at the teacher in a big surprise but they weren't convinced."This is a dinosaur. It was called-pterosaur!""It is amazing!"The children shouted happily. That was so incredible."But a dinosaur can eat children!"A child said with fear."He is my pet!" said the teacher with pride. "His name was Peter!"
The children went towards Peter carefully. Peter didn’t look terrible. This was the kind dinosaur I had ever seen. "Hooohoo…" Peter shouted at top of hisvoice. One of the children ran towards Peter gingerly. He touched Peter's body. "Do you want play with us?" He asked excitedly. "Hooohoo …" Peter shouted again. Just then, the children ran after Peter. But Peter could fly. They couldn't catch up with Peter. Children chased and chased, Peter ran and ran. They ran as quickly as they could. They played for more than half hours. They didn't catch him in the end. Now, Peter let the children on himself! A boy jumped on his back. Then he squatted. Suddenly, he flew to the sky. The boy had a big smile on his face. "That's exciting!" When Peter touched down, the boy shouted in a big surprise. "Ling" The bells rang."Go back to the classroom please!" The teacher ordered. Then, Peter flew to the sky. He vanished in the sky.