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有氧读写第二期孩子们作品集(4)

(2012-05-28 10:08:49)
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The Wild Ride

Sunny Sun

 

The micro friend went on a water adventure. They made a raft out of pencils and started a wild ride. The current was strong. Their raft hit a fence and broke. Max, Cat and Tiger jumped onto the shore in time, but Ant landed in the middle of a pond. And they saw a big giant shadow it was horrible! And something happened.
Ant wanted to save himself he wanted to swim to the fence but it was too late. The micro friends had seen some golden fish changed into the transforms super golden fish swam in the pond, they were scared, they shouted out loud, and then the fish changed bigger and bigger, "Ahh! I couldn't bear it anymore!" Cat closed her eyes and screamed out also Tiger screamed out. Just then a rainbow appeared and a kind beautiful angel came, she said that because Ant was a good boy and he was very kind to the classmate so the angle let Ant to come back with his friend. When Ant got back and it seemed he had many good things to tell everyone. Ant wanted him to come back, but there was no way to let her come back. They thought for a little while, "Oh! I know, we can use the watch to let us come back and go into our den and make something and fight with the Transformer's fish." In the way they saw some huge dog and bee if they worked they would walk a year to go to the den just like a snail crawl to the den, so they let the huge dog to help them to get to the den. And quickly made something in their den then found a toy shooting gun and some small ball to shoot the transformer's fish. The fish was afraid but it didn't be kind, at last Tiger and Max used the rope to entangle the two transformer's fish and then they seemed to be very scared, so they plead for leniency and cried "I'll never do bad things, please forgive me, I promise!" So the micro friends for give the transformer's fish. The transformer's fish changed into a very cute golden fish just in time and became a very cute fish, like a little baby.
 This story tells us that: Be good and any good thing will come to you.

Maggie's Record-breaking Trip

Tina

 

Maggie broke a world record on 3rd January 2012. In 2007, Lucy travel to Lanzhou all by herself. Maggie wanted to beat this record. Her trip was from Beijing to Tibet. It was really a long journey! She went there on foot. She spent 45 days to break it. It was more than 3731 kilometers long.
Maggie is a special girl. She was 12 years old! She was taught to travel on foot by her teacher Lily. She was born in Beijing. She started her journey when she was nine years old. She liked traveling very much and she would like to break a new world record by herself.
Maggie practiced a lot for her journey. First she read some books which is about the customs in the other places and some books which is about some long journey. And then she went to a lot of famous places on foot with her parents. In 2009, she started her first journey. It was from Beijing to Tianjin. It took her about 120 kilometers far. In 2010, she started her second journey. It was from Beijing to Shanghai. It took her 211 hours. It was about 1268 kilometers far. In 2011, she started her third journey. It was from Beijing to Lanzhou. It took her 398 hours. It was about 2095 kilometers far. In 2012, she started her most important journey. It was from Beijing to Tibet. It took her 45 days. It was about 3731 kilometers far.
She was very excited about this trip but if she wanted to make this trip. She had to buy some shoes, food, water, a lot of clothes, a camera and to bring some money because they were all very important for her. Although it was really very hard but she could also see some fantastic scenery and learn some things from the local people while traveling. She talked with the local people and lived in their home. They were all very friendly. They always invite her have a lunch with them. But sometimes she had to live in a hotel or eat in a restaurant. There were many trees and flowers in the countryside and the air was very fresh so she can enjoy herself very much. She came back on 6th March, we were all very happy!

A Wild Ride

Maggie

 

The micro-friends went on their thrilling trip. But Ant was separated from his friend--Cat Max and Tiger.
Suddenly, Cat saw a giant shadow in the pond. She felt very scared about it. She told his friends and shouted to Ant, "Be careful!" Ant didn't know what it meant. Cat pointed to the pond. Ant saw the giant shadow. Although he was very scared, he knew, at this important time, he couldn't be scared of it. He quickly ran to the garden, and found some small stones, and then threw the stones to the giant shadow. SPLASH! Suddenly, a terrible and large sound came out from the giant shadow. It rose up its head with two frightening eyes. "It's a big fish, we are in danger, let's run!" screamed Cat.
Cat, Max and Tiger ran quickly over the forest, but the monster was chasing Ant! Ant wanted to run more quickly, but he couldn't. The monster ran faster and faster, and Ant didn't have any more energy. The monster chased him. Ant had no more idea to run away. At this time, Tiger, Cat and Max were all very worried about Ant, so they decided to let Tiger help Ant. Just when the monster wanted to take Ant back to the river, Tiger arrived. Tiger quickly made a slingshot and launched it to the monster's right eye. Then, the monster couldn't see anything. Tiger and Ant ran quickly through the forest.
Finally, they met Cat and Max. They were all very happy that Ant was fine. They turned the dials back. They all thought they had a thrilling and interesting trip. They were ready for their next trip....

A Wild Ride

Lucy Lu

 

This again will be once interesting run a risk. Cat, Mat, Ant, Tiger paddle the boat again and went isle to begin new run a risk. The environment on the island is very beautiful, like a color. Cat is fishing , protrait the river leveled a mirror. Suddenly, a huge lobster caught  the fish and strike out . Help, Help, Help. Soon, get on the boat .Max said  . thank you , this is really asoul strring run a risk . Cat said .

Rose

 Wide Ride

Max, Cat and Tiger were looking for the Ant worriedly. Ant picked up four huge leaves and gave them to Max, Cat and Tiger and they could use the leaves to shield the rain. ''Ant, we're going to the island!'' said Max but Ant didn't hear. Ant went to right and he made angry the giant shadow. The giant shadow is a big insect. Max, Cat and Tiger went to their right but they didn't find Ant. Suddenly, they were heard to someone shouted. ''Aaagh!'' screamed the people. The noise was Ant. They were running faster and faster to Ant. They heard Ant shout. Max, Cat and Tiger fear with Ant. They were discover a big vegetable and the vegetable bigger than insect and they were behind a bigger vegetable. The big insect still seemed. Suddenly, Cat thought of a good idea. She used the watch to become catch big and they become bigger. They caught the insect. ''Aaagh!'' they said. They kicked it. Then they went home.

A Wild Ride

Lily Li

 

The micro-raft went on wild water through the park. Then... LOOK OUT! Max, Cat and Tiger jump from the raft just in time. The raft breaks but Ant holds on. He skims across the water. He lands on the small island in the middle of the pond. Now Max, cat and Tiger have to get him back.
"Wow! It's a bigger fish." shouted Cat. Then this fish swam as fast as a dolphin. It got in front of Cat. It opened its big mouse. Cat was scared. This fish may eat her. "Don't be scared, Cat. The fish doesn't see you." said Max. Ant was more frightened than Cat, because that small island was going down. Then, Max's mum walked in front of them. Max had a good idea. He ran off into the grass beside the path. He was hiding there but the ground was wet. His feet got stuck in the mud. "Mum..."thought Max.

A Wild Ride

Judy

 

Cat looked out across the pond. Poor Ant seemed smaller than ever! Then she saw something move in the water. A giant shadow swam past. "I think we need a bigger," said Cat...
Then the giant shadow swam past. 'Help!" Let me have a look...Why we can't swim to Ant and save him?" "That is a great idea! Why don't we go now?"  They swam to Ant but then the giant shadow jumped out of the water. It was a giant fish "Oh no! Maybe we are in dangerous!" cried Cat. Tiger swam faster and faster. He swam to Ant. Poor Max and Cat! The fish was swimming to them.  It almost caught them. "Quick! Run away!" shouted Tiger. They swam faster and faster. The fish could not catch them. They used the pencil as a raft to ride on it. Then the fish come out again!  Tiger swam down the water and fight with the giant fish. Cat, Max and Ant threw rocks to the fish. It hid the fish's head! The fish swam away fast. It was afraid them. Tiger went back to the raft. He was all wet. Then there was water splash on the raft. The raft was broken again. So they turned the dials and got bigger and bigger. They went back to their home. Tiger looked outside the window. It was still rainy. "This is an exciting adventure I have ever been!" said Tiger.

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