2016年6月四级写作真题解析2：进入大学之际，向老师表达谢意

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to one of your school teachers upon entering college. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

 【解析】写作第一件事就是审题，务必关注“体裁、话题、内容要求”只要肯仔细看题，即可发现，体裁要求为letter，内容要求express your thanks to one of your school teachers upon entering college，即在你进入大学之际感谢你的一位在校老师；写作话题为感谢信；重点把握题干中四种词：名动形副。天哪，2014年12月，写过大学中印象最深刻的一门课，只要把这门课换成任课老师即可。

近年的四级写作命题趋势愈加明显，就是反押题：“酒瓶装新酒”。

【破题思路】

首段：感写信目的，并致谢

中间段：写自己英语学习曾经的困难和老师的帮助

尾段：再次致谢并祝愿展望

范文：

Dear Mr. Sky, (求你了，不要写Teacher Shi, 知道什么是Chinglish吗？)

    I am writing this letter to express my thanks to you, because your encouragement brings me power, arouses my enthusiasm for study and helps me to succeed in English learning.

    In the past, I had a variety of difficulties in English study. For instance, I had great trouble in memorizing words. In addition, it was difficult for me to understand the rules of grammar. Though I could write and read, I failed to express myself freely in oral English. Then, I attended your English course and you encouraged me to participate in English club. Now, I am convinced that practice makes perfect. It is your help that enables me to build up adequate not only knowledge, but also confidence and competence. As a matter of fact, through your class, I have come to realize that nothing can succeed without a strong will.

    As your student, I deem that it is of great necessity for me to strive for greater goals in college. Thank you so much! I believe that if I try my utmost to do so, the future of my college life will be hopeful and promising.

                                                                                                                                Yours truly

                                                                                                                                Shang Long