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2016年6月四级写作真题解析1:给父母或家人的感谢信

(2016-06-18 12:23:36)
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your parents or any family member upon making a memorable achievement. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

 

解析:写作第一件事就是审题,务必关注“体裁、话题、内容要求”只要肯仔细看题,即可发现,体裁要求为letter,内容要求express your thanks to your parents or any family member upon making a memorable achievement;写作话题为感谢信;重点把握题干中四种词:名动形副。

破题思路:

首段:感写信目的,并致谢

中间段:写难忘的一次成功(比如英语比赛、英语考试好成绩)

尾段:再次致谢并祝愿

 

范文:

Dear Parents, (注意格式:非冒号,是逗号)

    I am writing this letter to express my thanks to you, because I made a memorable achievement in recent English Speech Competition.

    During my high school study, I had a variety of difficulties in English learning. For instance, I had great trouble memorizing words. In addition, it was also difficult for me to understand the rules of grammar. Though I could write and read, I could not express myself freely in oral English. Then, you encouraged me to participate in the English Club. Gradually, I am convinced that practice makes perfect. It is constant practice that enables me to build up adequate knowledge, skills and competence about making speech in English. Finally, I succeeded in this competition. Your encouragement brings me power, arouses my enthusiasm for English and helps me to make progress every day.

    As your child, I am convinced that suppose I intend to achieve greater success in future, it is advisable for me to set a greater goal. I deem that if I try my utmost to do everything, the future of my life will be hopeful and promising. Thanks again, my dear parents!

                                                                                                                  Yours Sincerely

                                                                                                                    Sky

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