Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
letter to express your thanks to your parents or any family member
upon making a memorable achievement. You should write at least 120
words but no more than 180 words.
解析:写作第一件事就是审题,务必关注“体裁、话题、内容要求”只要肯仔细看题,即可发现,体裁要求为letter,内容要求express
your thanks to your parents or any family member upon making a
memorable achievement;写作话题为感谢信;重点把握题干中四种词:名动形副。
破题思路:
首段:感写信目的,并致谢
中间段:写难忘的一次成功(比如英语比赛、英语考试好成绩)
尾段:再次致谢并祝愿
范文:
Dear Parents, (注意格式:非冒号,是逗号)
I am writing this letter to express my thanks to
you, because I made a memorable achievement in recent English
Speech Competition.
During my high school study, I had a variety of
difficulties in English learning. For instance, I had great trouble
memorizing words. In addition, it was also difficult for me to
understand the rules of grammar. Though I could write and read, I
could not express myself freely in oral English. Then, you
encouraged me to participate in the English Club. Gradually, I am
convinced that practice makes perfect. It is constant practice that
enables me to build up adequate knowledge, skills and competence
about making speech in English. Finally, I succeeded in this
competition. Your encouragement brings me power, arouses my
enthusiasm for English and helps me to make progress every day.
As your child, I am convinced that suppose I
intend to achieve greater success in future, it is advisable for me
to set a greater goal. I deem that if I try my utmost to do
everything, the future of my life will be hopeful and promising.
Thanks again, my dear parents!
Yours Sincerely
Sky
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