2019年6月大学英语四级答案写作部分

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 写作第二套 

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a news report to your campus newspaper on a visit to a Hope elementary school organized by your Student Union. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 

【简析】

题干包含的要点信息主要是两个方面：一、体裁为“a news report”, 可能很多同学会略感惊慌，其实四级听力的第一部分就是新闻，大家应该不陌生；二、话题和内容要求是一致的，即“学生会组织的一项造访希望小学的活动”。

【破题思路】

首段：介绍新闻主要内容

二段：阐释要点

尾段：提出建议或号召

【参考范文】

On June 14, our Student Union organized a visit to a Hope elementary school and 35 volunteers participated. 

This activity is simple but meaningful, in which volunteers brought books and presents for the students in the school. During this visit, they found that a host of primary school boys and girls have a variety of difficulties or troubles in their English learning. Then, our Student Union held various activities to help them and also told them that practice makes perfect. It was also through practice that the volunteers helped the students accumulate their confidence and skills for learning. In addition, the volunteers encouraged the boys and girls to try their utmost to work hard, which will ensure them a promising and hopeful future. 

A majority of participants in this visit acknowledge that they prefer communicating and sharing with primary school students. They deem that this visit can bring schoolchildren a happy experience, inspire their passion for study and help them improve themselves.