Task2:Some
people argue that too much attention and too many resources are
given to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent
do you agree or disagree.
当然，如果你是一直看真题过来的，动物保护类话题也不是什么新鲜玩意儿，常提到的也就是那几点－－－人类对动物下手无非就是食其肉，寝（着）其皮，如果人类的贪婪能够打住，保护动物就不只是那些animal
protectionists高喊的口号了，所以你完全可以写关于动物保护咱们现在做得远远不够。
body1--－（让步）论证题中观点（为什么有人声称过多资源倾斜于wildlife
protection不合理) 一方面，通过各方努力，野生动物保护已经取得一些成效
；另一方面，人类还有很多基本需求没有满足急需更多社会资源。
body2：（驳论）论证动物保护做得还不够，现实中依然存在各种掠杀动物的残忍行为（杀戮、交易）
结论：尽管wildlife protection
已经有一些进步，但人类要真正做到与他们的wildlife
neighbors和谐相处还有很长的路要走，因此野生动物保护要继续进行下去。
这里还有另外一种思路：
body1: 论证保护野生动物的必要性
body2:
论证资源分配到其他方面（比如民生工程，教育科技医疗等方面）的必要性。
大家觉得上面哪种思路更好，或者说更好写呢？
以下是Amy第一时间以第一种思路写的essay，供大家参考：
The habitat
conditions of wildlife, particularly those
endangered species have been significantly
improved due to relentless efforts from animal
protectionists. However, some people do not think it is wise to
allocate too many resources to wildlife
conservation.
It is easy to understand why
people object to investing too much on animals. One the one hand,
it is true that wild animals and birds of rare species are well
protected in some developed countries where large
natural preserves are well built and maintained. Tourists are more
civilized and they show respect to the habitats of
wild animals when visiting wetlands. Laws have
been established to ban cruel abuse or murdering of animals and
children learn to identify and rescue wild species
from textbooks. On the other hand, there are still
people starving and being deprived of basic sanitary conditions
around the world. According to a recent report in US, among
five children one goes to school
without lunch every day and the
country's free lunch plan for poverty-stricken children is in badly
need of financial support. For many people, It is justified
that people's wellbeing should be
taken into consideration before animals are taken good care
of.
However, it is not
always the same case all around the world and wild animals are
still being hunted and slaughtered inhumanely in many
places. Although there
are laws that forbid poaching
rare animals for human
consumption, endangered animals are still seen on dining table as
gourmet dishes. Besides, as people's preference for leather
products as fashion continues, each year hundreds
of thousands of tigers and seals are shot to death and illegal
profits are gained from fur trades. To some extent, as long as
individual needs for products made from animals exist, brutal
killing will not disappear and those animals will be at a risk.
What is worse, wildlife habit is rapidly disappearing due to
development and other human-caused changes. Considering all these factors, it is hard to say that too
much has been done to protect
wild animals.
In conclusion, I think preserving wild animals
is necessary and calls for efforts from both
governments and individual citizens. While
progress has been made during the past decades to provide livable
habitats for those endangered species, there
is still a long way to go before we can live harmony with our wild
neighbors.
以下为大家提供另一种思路参考，个人认为这种回答问题的逻辑比较严密，对题目是比较合理的回应。
该不该利用过多资源保护野生动物？
1.
目前确实有很多资源用在野生动物保护方面了，并且也取得一些成效。
It is obvious that caring and
investing about wild animals and birds’ survival are increasing.
The media, for instance, has given more coverage to animal
protection. Likewise, loads of funding from either governments or
private organisations has been poured into scientific projects and
voluntary programmes for the benefits of
wildlife.
2.
但，过多投入资源不一定能取得相应效果。自然进化，环境气候恶化导致有些物种必然会消失。
Unfortunately, with all kinds
of efforts to save the wildlife, it is not necessarily making a
difference. During the process of evolution, some species may be
destined to disappear as more advanced ones will one day appear.
Besides, global warming and other types of climate changes make it
tougher for wild creatures to adapt. Therefore, however hard we
try, some still have to go.
3.
而且，很多其他更紧急的方面（比如各种民生工程）需要资源。如果资源用在这些方面，野生动物会得到更好的保护。
Moreover, as the government's
financial budget is not unlimited, priorities needs to be
made when resources are allocated. Urgent issues
like food shortage and poor sanitary
conditions still exist in various parts of the
world and call for immediate attention. For many
people, It is justified
that people's wellbeing should be
taken into consideration before animals are taken good care
of.
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