2016.5.28雅思写作第一时间考题解析+范文

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大作文原题目：

New parents should attend parenting courses to bring up their children well. 

To what extent do u agree or disagree？

 

题目译文：

新父母应该参加育儿课程目的是把孩子养育好。

到什么程度上你同意还是不同意？

 

话题类型：

家庭教育类

 

话题频率：

低

 

类似题目：

2013.1.19

Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

 

题目分析：

这是13年的老题的变形，写法其实都一样，详情参考子母题分析归纳

 

 

 

思路拓展：

参加：

1.父母是孩子的第一任老师，他们对于孩子们的精神成长以及性格培养有潜移默化的影响。而且育儿是一件比较讲究方法和技巧的工程，很多父母对正确的教育方式没有清晰的认识.

 

不参加：

1.许多有经济能力的父母，未必有时间参加，比如社会精英 工作时间特别长的父母，但是，他们可以努力赚钱，聘请专业的育儿老师来教育孩子.

2.还有很多父母本身就不具备足够的经济能力，所以对贫困家庭而言，父母的可支配收入有限，学习育儿课程虽有利好，却会增加父母的经济负担，在现实生活中很难实现.

3.新父母的父母没上上过这种课，也照样把他们养大，所以上课没必要

 

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范文参考：

It has been proved that poor parenting imposes a negative influence on children's physiological development.Some people suggest that taking parenting classes is a better way for new parents to foster kids.In my opinion,not all parents have to attend these courses.

 

Admittedly,the development in one's early stage of life is so vital and many of parents have little experience of caring for children but experience of being cared.They do not know how to educate kids well,in which way and what to do is better.If young parents are equipped with sufficient childcare knowledge about childcare,they can better protect their infants or toddlers from various

risks,detect possible warning signs of development delay,better understand a child's emotional needs and help establish healthy eating habits.

 

However,for some wealthy family,parents find it difficult to spend time on these classes as they are too busy with their work.For example,stars and famous sportsmen hardly appear in our living places,not to mentions learning childcare knowledge and being our classmates always in a classroom.But they may hire a professional childcare worker,considering the necessity of parenting and reality.

 

Also,attending classes does not apply to families which are struck in poverty.Every coins they made is already to be spent on commodities,rents and tuition,so there is relatively limited disposable income for them.This is,when money is spent on such courses,parents will shoulder a more heavily financial burden.And it is certainly true that our grandparents never attended any parenting classes and they raised our parents with no major regret.So we could keep this tradition,learning from our parents.

 

In conclusion，child-care courses are available for parents who have enough disposable time and economic support.

 

 

相关词汇：

poor parenting          较差的家庭教育

 infants or toddlers      婴儿和蹒跚学步的小孩

healthy eating habits   健康的饮食习惯

development delay     发育迟缓

emotional needs        情感需求

 

语法句式：

Every coins they made is already to be spent on commodities,rents and tuitions,so there is relatively limited disposable income for them.

他们挣得每一分钱已经将要花费在必需品、房租和孩子学费上，所以说他们有相当有限的可支配收入.

 

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