My Favorite Painting

    We all know that we have studied Unit 3 which tells us about how to listen to music, and the author have introduced three planes to us in order to explain our understanding of music and emphasizes that he does so mechanically. The first plane is the sensuous plane. It is the simplest way of listening to music,and in this way we often listen to music is to listen for the sheer pleasure of the musical sound itself. The second plane is the expressive plane,that means when we listen to music we should be more careful so that we can have an express on them.?The final plane is the sheer musical plane,which tells us music does exist in terms of the notes themselves and of their manipulation. And it is important for us to become more alive to music on its sheer musical plane.

    To be honest, the form of art I enjoy is the landscape painting of water and ink painting.

   As we all know,wash painting just consist of two colors and through control their ratio we can paint many different painting.?So you maybe ask me why I like the way of painting.

    In my opinion,the simple art is ,the better it is .Because simple art can give me more space to imagine and I will be more careful in enjoying it. From ancient times to the present, the are many paintings of China are centered on wash painting,and every painting of them was also having themselves characteristic.?So although how them will change,I still like them all the time.

    In a word, different people have different opinion.?So what I have said just stand for my personal opinion.

    No matter whether other people's attitude different from me,I still insist my opinion.

 开头的课文概要写的很好，说明课文掌握很棒。后面对水墨画的特色技巧都有说明，说明对这个专业很了解，是行家里手。只是，我们在写喜欢水墨画时，需要指出具体喜欢那幅画，然后再从感官层，表现力层，绘画技法层解释你为什么喜欢这幅画。这样，绘画欣赏就有了层次感，我们也就学会了作者分析欣赏作品的方法与思路。

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