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My favorite painting is Mona Lisa, hanging on the wall of Louvre, is famous worldwide for the trigger that its mystery. Leonardo Da Vinci is an excellent person who contributed a lot in art as well as in science. Adolescent Da Vinci was absorbed in other subjects such as physics, medicine and astronomy as well and he even tried to make a robot. The woman sat on the chair with her shoulders in her arms. This way of sitting is now used by many artists when they are painting a picture of a man otherwise woman today. She was a charming woman with a mysterious smile. Fairly a few people hold the view that she smiled for the trigger that her kindness while others thought for the factor that sadness. In my view, whatever her smile means, the fact is that she is graceful and particular. I hold the view that this painting is one of the greatest works in the world. Not merely is that the background of great painting but it emphasises the beauty of the woman in simple black. In conclusion, it was a blessing that we could have such a good painter and we could enjoy such an unexceptionable painting.

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