豆豆自编的第二个“典范”故事
(2010-10-23 20:06:04)
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豆豆习作典范英语故事口述 |
分类: 小豆豆学英语 |
One day, Biff and Chip went on holiday.
They took Floppy and Kipper.
The found a house.
Nobody lived in the house.
"We can live here." said Biff.
They went into the house.
The house was beautiful and luxurious.
"It's brilliant." said Chip.
"I like the house." said Kipper.
Floppy barked and barked.
The house had seven floors.
They went to the sixth floor.
The room was spooky.
The children were frightened.
Floppy barked and barked.
They ran downstairs.
"It's a mysterious room."said Biff.
"I'm frightened." said Kipper.
The fifth floor was beautiful.
There were some famous paintings on the walls.
There were three beds in the room.
"We can sleep in the beds." said Kipper.
The beds were beautiful.
"But how about Floppy? Where can he sleep?" asked Biff.
"I don't know." said Kipper.
Chip had an idea."He can sleep on the third floor. I saw a kennel on the third floor when I went upstairs."
It was time for supper.
"Who can cook the supper?" asked Chip.
"I can." said Biff. "I learned how to cook from Dad."
Biff cooked supper. It was a delicious supper.
The children ate the supper.
Floppy found a big bone. He ate the bone.
Everyone was full.
It was time to go to bed.
The children went to the fifth floor.
Floppy went to the third floor. He was fast asleep.
The children were fast asleep too.
Kipper dreamed about their house was luxurious too.
妈妈的话:
这是今天早晨豆起床前给妈妈讲的一个故事,由妈妈记录下来。人物都是典范英语里的,Chip Biff Kipper是一个家里从大到小的三个孩子,只有Biff是女孩儿,Floppy是他们家的狗。
豆周末早晨起床前总喜欢懒一会儿再起来,并且要妈妈也陪着。本来妈妈想让豆讲一课典范英语中的故事,结果豆说想自编一个,就有了上面这个故事,为了多懒一会儿,豆这个故事比上次那个要长,后来催着才赶快结了尾。
红色的字都是豆不会,但又想表达的。
“当...的时候”,时间状语从句,豆还不会用when来表达,顺便给她讲了讲。
表示顺序的数字“第几”,豆还没学过,都是妈妈帮忙的,顺便教了教她。
beautiful用的有点儿多,但实在是词汇量有限,没办法。
最后一句话有毛病,应该是个宾语从句,先随豆去吧,以后她会知道的。