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考官9分范文带你学正确雅思写作办法(别定从表从傻傻的分不清)

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周末考试在即,为巩固你们的堂上记忆,coco用一篇9分考官范文将我们学过的部分知识点过一遍,请大家仔细研读。这篇满分范文里我们能看到的加分点包括,但不限于,复杂多变的从句,正确使用的连词,介词结构的前中后置,词汇的灵活多变,等等。coco已经在原文上标注出我们上课学习的对应知识点和模板句,考官都这么用,大家就给我老老实实看会课上的笔记逐个去复习哦。祝你们屠鸭顺利!!
考官9分范文带你学正确雅思写作办法(别定从表从傻傻的分不清)

雅思考官满分范文【媒体电影类题材】

Topic:

Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be?

Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?


Sample Answer:

It is true that(coco课上给大家背记的模板句型,大家一定要记熟,看完这篇推送后,上课的同学快复习我们的课堂笔记哦) foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced (adv,adj,v,n的摆放位置,再提醒你们复习笔记) films. There could be several reasons why(我们的从句模板句,请看讲义) this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by subsidising the industry(短而有力的观点句!记得coco堂上强调考雅思要英式写法,不要美式长句,再提醒下大家).


There are various reasons why(这里又是课上的模板句,一定要记好我给你们的素材) many people find foreign films more enjoyable than the films produced in their own countries. Firstly, the established film industries in certain countries have huge budgets for action, special effects and to shoot scenes in spectacular locations. (考官一样是道理论证和举例论证相结合,大家写得嗨时可别忘了- -!)Hollywood blockbusters like ‘Avatar’ or the James Bond films are examples of such productions, and their global appeal is undeniable. Another reason why(又是我们的模板句) these big-budget films are so successful is that (表从,不记得的复习课堂笔记) they often star the most famous actors and actresses, and(并列连词基础用法,你们懂coco为啥反复强调一定不能少了吧) they are made by the most accomplished producers and directors. The poor quality, low-budget filmmaking in many countries suffers in comparison.


In my view, governments should support local film industries financially(看,这里又是短而有力的中心句,你们是不是都写绕了?记得coco课上教的,不要用美式写法,雅思考试要用英式写法,短而有力而且精确到位). In every country, there may be talented amateur film-makers who(定从,再一次晒句式多样化,请看笔记) just need to be given the opportunity to prove themselves. To compete with big-budget productions from overseas(不定式表目的,语法多样性), these people need money to pay for film crews, actors and a host of other costs related to producing high-quality films. If governments did(do动词的“的确”用法) help with these costs, they would (虚拟,请复习) see an increase in employment in the film industry, income from film sales, and perhaps even a rise in tourist numbers. New Zealand, for example,(这里是coco课上和大家一再强调的,中置显示语法多样性,教你装逼带你飞) has seen an increase in tourism related to the 'Lord of the Rings' films, which(非限定性定从,语法灵活多变,请复习coco课上的笔记) were partly funded by government subsidies.


In conclusion, I believe that increased financial support could help to raise the quality of locally made films and allow them to compete with the foreign productions that currently dominate the market (短结尾,一句话涵盖之前的观点,v转n省字数,这个也是讲过的,请周末考试的同学好好复习我们的讲义).

(294 words, band 9)


各位周末烤鸭,现在就尽情刷最后一周的复习吧。记得看讲义哦,新题就不用再多做了,冷静下,多复习就知识,还有就是背口语。6.5+是木有问题哒~~大家加油哦!!

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