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 ---讀詩家非馬《痰》
 
 非馬“吞下那麽多/祖傳秘方的靈丹/”,詩乾脆,長話短說。是呀,一個文明的國度,有那麼多這個典、那個經……“卻依然無法/消痰化氣//”,呵呵,多麼一針見血的詩句!說的就是我、是他(她)、難道不是你?“也不等塵沙漫天刮起/便七嘴八舌/把堂堂的省城/喀喀/吐成一個/大痰盂”,這是一個多麼令人作嘔的場面;難道不值得你我反思嗎?!詩家在博客上回復我道:詩寫的是我1980年頭一次返鄉的經驗.
希望現在已有所改善.詩寫什麼?如何挖掘詩……?這裡詩家已經免費教授予我們了。《痰》是生活中的一面鏡子,請君對號入座……
 
 非馬原詩:痰
 
 “吞下那麽多
 祖傳秘方的靈丹
 卻依然無法
 消痰化氣
 
 也不等塵沙漫天刮起
 便七嘴八舌
 把堂堂的省城
 喀喀
 吐成一個
 大痰盂
 
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