2017年12月16日四级写作真题与范文

真题一：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on how to best handle the relationship between doctors and patients. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

范文：

On How to Best Handle the Relationship between Doctors and Patients

（提出问题）The past few years have witnessed a mounting number of cases resulting from the conflict between doctors and patients. Taking a look around, one can find examples too many to enumerate. In some of the cases, patients or their relatives even killed the doctor.

（分析问题）A number of factors can account for the problem, but the leading reasons are as follow. In the first place, doctors depend too much on medicine and examination for income. Therefore, they often prescribe more than the patient needs. In the second place, medical resources are not distributed in a balanced way, with most of them located in major cities and big hospitals.   

（解决问题）In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before the situation deteriorates. First, it is imperative that policies and regulations be worked out and enforced to separate medical service from medicine and to allocate medical resources in a more reasonable way. Secondly, both doctors and patients should enhance the awareness of mutual understanding and mutual respect. With these measures taken, we have every reason to believe that the problem will be remedied in the near future.

解析：

这次的四级作文属于“解决问题型”，即给出的话题是需要解决的问题，而且有可能要求写出其原因、影响及解决办法。

这是自2000年1月以来第7次考查该类型。前6次分别是：2003年1月的“做人要诚实”（It Pays to be Honest），2008年12月的“限制一次性塑料袋的使用”（Limiting the Use of Disposable Bags），2009年12月的“建设绿色校园”（Creating a Green Campus ），2010年6月的“应该重视（英语）拼写”（Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling），2010年12月的“父母应该怎样帮孩子自立”（How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent ）和2012年6月的“商品的过度包装”（Excessive Packaging）。

其实，很多图画题本质上也是解决问题型。四级历史上所有的图画作文都是这种类型，包括：2013年6月的“年轻人爱看手机短信而不爱看文学著作”、“一屋不扫何以扫天下（不能从身边的小事做起）”、“忽视基础知识的重要性”，2013年12月的“网络对人际交流的负面影响”、“网络对学生学习的负面影响”、“现代人过度使用手机”，2015年6月的“现代人过度使用电脑”、“手机对学生学习的负面影响 ”、“父母替孩子做决定”。

解决问题型作文的写作思路基本是：1、描述相关现象，可举例论证；2、分析原因和/或分析影响；3、提出建议。

真题二：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on how to best handle the relationship between teachers and students. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

范文：

On How to Best Handle the Relationship between Teachers and Students

（提出问题）The past few years have witnessed a mounting number of cases resulting from the conflict between teachers and students. Taking a look around, one can find examples too many to enumerate. In some of the cases, the student even killed the teacher.

（分析问题）A number of factors can account for the problem, but the leading reasons are as follow. In the first place, teachers attach too much importance to examinations and scores, thus exerting too much pressure on students. In the second place, the school and parents ignore the mental health and psychological education of children.    

（解决问题）In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before the situation deteriorates. First, it is imperative that policies and regulations be worked out and enforced to relieve students’ burden and ensure their mental health. Secondly, both teachers and students should enhance the awareness of mutual understanding and mutual respect. With these measures taken, we have every reason to believe that the problem will be remedied in the near future.

真题三：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on how to best handle the relationship between parents and children. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

范文：

On How to Best Handle the Relationship between Parents and Children

（提出问题）The past few years have witnessed a mounting number of cases resulting from the conflict between parents and children. Taking a look around, one can find examples too many to enumerate. In some of the cases, the child even killed his father or mother.

（分析问题）A number of factors can account for the problem, but the leading reasons are as follow. In the first place, parents attach too much importance to examinations and scores, thus exerting too much pressure on children. In the second place, some parents ignore the mental health and psychological education of children. Last but not least, some parents spoil their children, who in turn disrespect them or depend too much on them.    

（解决问题）In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before the situation deteriorates. First, it is imperative that policies and regulations be worked out and enforced to relieve children’s academic burden and instruct parents as to how to educate their children. Secondly, both parents and children should enhance the awareness of mutual understanding and mutual respect. With these measures taken, we have every reason to believe that the problem will be remedied in the near future.