书面表达详解
书面表达详解
一、本题特点，图片型半开放。描述图片部分是有依据的图片描述，需看懂图画，写出图片画出的主要事件，特别是重要细节。开放部分则需要首先把图片的寓意看准确，然后有针对性地发表议论。
二、本题有两个要求：
1. 简要描述图片内容 2. 结合生活实际, 就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
三、审题(大意)：
1. 图片内容：一个小女孩在学骑车，一家几代都在围着她转，害怕她受伤。显得比小孩还着急，比小孩还累。其实这样小孩没法好好学习，她希望能自己独自练习。图片的寓意：对孩子实施了过度的保护。
2. 在生活实际中，处处可见对孩子的过度保护，父母害怕孩子出问题，包办一切，不让孩子得到独立的锻炼。要知道，温室里的树木是长不成材的。
四、写作注意事项：
1. 人称和时态: 本文使用第三人称。由于是描述图片，并且内容带有普遍性质，故用现在方面的时态。
2. 就按题目要求，罗列要点顺序，开门见山，不绕弯子，不离题发挥。不求特别，但求稳妥。语言根据自己的水平，不求精采，但求正确，特别注意要有主语和谓语。
五、要点列表：
1. 小女孩在学骑车。
2. 父母和奶奶害怕她摔倒，尽力在保护。
3. 大人的做法没法让小孩有效地学下去。
4. 现实生活中，父母不想让孩子冒险，保护过度。
5. 有碍孩子的成长。
六、要点句子。注意写出主语、谓语，以及需要的动词和动词句型：
1. 一个小女孩 | 在学习骑车。(learn how to do something)
2. 她的父母和奶奶 | 害怕她摔倒。(be afraid that, fall off something)
      他们 | 在尽力地保护她。(try to do something, support somebody)
      她妈妈 | 背了个急救箱。(carry something)
3. 小女孩很难有效地学习。(It is difficult for somebody to do something)
4. 父母 | 对孩子保护过度。(take too much care of somebody)
      他们 | 不想让孩子冒险。(want somebody to do something, take risks)
5. 父母的行为 | 阻碍了孩子的健康成长。(prevent somebody from doing something)
      树木 | 在温室里长不强壮。(grow big and strong)
七、英语句子(主语部分+谓语部分)：
1. A girl is learning how to ride a bike.
2. Her parents and her grandmother are afraid that she might fall off the bike
      They are trying hard to support her.
      Her mother is carrying a first–aid box.
3. It is difficult for her to learn properly.
4. Parents take too much care of their children
      They don't want their children to take any risks.
5. Their action prevents their children from growing up strong and healthy.
      Trees can’t grow big and strong in a greenhouse.
八、联句成篇，加上适当的过度语：
版本一:
A girl is learning how to ride a bike. Her parents and her grandmother are trying hard to support her because they are afraid that she might fall off the bike. The mother is even carrying a first–aid box. But with all of them around her, it is difficult for the girl to learn properly, so she tells them to let her ride it by herself.
In our real life, such things happen everywhere. Parents love their children too much. They take care of everything for them. They don’t want them to take any risks. However, by doing so, the parents actually prevent their children from growing up strong and healthy. Parents should know that trees can’t grow big and strong in a greenhouse.
版本二(easier):
Look at the picture. A little girl is learning how to ride a bike. All her family are helping her. They are worried about her safety. Her mother is carrying a medical box. She is afraid that her daughter might get injured. Everybody is nervous, busy and tired except the girl. She has little to do. In fact, she doesn’t like this. She wants to ride alone.
There are a lot of similar things in our daily life. Parents give their children too much love. They do everything to help their children. It is bad for their development. Parents cannot protect their children forever. Children need to learn to do things themselves. And they can make it, if their parents give them some space.
版本三(more advanced):
Look at this picture. There is a little girl learning how to ride a bike. Her parents and her grandmother, who are afraid that she might fall off the bike, are making every effort to support her. The mother is even carrying a first–aid box. Though all of them are busy and sweating heavily, the girl finds it very difficult to learn with them around.
In our real life, we can see something like that happening everywhere. Parents do what they can for their children, making sure that they don’t take any risks. However, with such protection, how can children grow strong and healthy? Parents should know that trees can’t grow big and strong in a greenhouse, and that their children need to be independent in the end.

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