3 Children Who Really Want to Grow Up

   They think Americans are very happy because they can drive cars at 16. They also think South Pacific island’s children are happy, too. Because they play bungee jumping when whey become adults. And they think bungee jumping is interesting.

评语：这是儿子第一次在他的小班写的作文。第一个完成，改写得不错，但是就是语法错误太明显。