A School Trip

   Spring is coming. Now it’s warm everywhere. We’ll have a school trip. We’ll go to climb the mountain, but what will we need? I know.

   It’s a school trip so we needn’t take lunch. We’ll take a cap. And we’ll take some water. We will take a stick to help us climb the mountain. Take the camera to take photographs. And we’ll go (leave更恰当) at 10:00. Don’t be late!

批语：这应该是儿子七年级下的一篇作文，写的还不错。扣2分。其中有书写的原因。比如，some写得非常像come.