本文是2010年英语（二）大作文全国第一，不知大家看完有何感想？可怜无数孩纸还以为作文中需要大量使用所谓的“亮点”表达和难词长句才能取得高分！又有多少孩纸眼高手低？自我感觉良好，考完往往低分。

Directions:

In this section, you are asked to write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

    1）interpret the chart and

    2）give your comments.

    You should write at least 150 English words.

    Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 Points)

（图表略）

Mobile-phone Subscriptions (2000-2008)

(subscription number: billion)

    As is shown in the chart, mobile phone subscriptions grow rapidly from 2000 to 2008. We can also find out that developing countries are the driving force for such a rapid growth. According to the chart, mobile-phone subscription number increased to 8 times from 2000 to 2008, that is from around 0.5 billion to 4 billion, while that of developed countries only increased twice from around 0.5 billion to 1 billion.

    I think there are two main reasons for such a great contrast. First of all, developing countries have much larger population than developed countries. For example, China and India nearly have half of the total population of the world. China has the most mobile-phone users right now, which increased greatly from 2000 to 2008. It is the same in India and other developing countries. Secondly, developing countries have been enjoying strong economic growth in recent years. As a result, people in most developing countries are richer and richer, especially in China. So they can afford to buy such necessities, including mobile-phone, as the prices continued to drop greatly in the past years.

    Thus, we can conclude that as economy grows strongly in developing countries, people in these countries can buy products. (201 words)

教育部考试中心《考试分析》评语：

本文得分14分（满分15分）。该文很好地完成了试题规定的任务，内容完整。在图表内容方面，考生并不仅仅局限于数字本身，而是注意挖掘这些数字背后的规律，是对图表具体数字的总结与升华。

在评论方面，内容也比较全面、中肯。本文总体结构完整，语言比较流畅，措辞准确，用词和句型有变化，无重大语法错误。另外，本文也有效使用了各种衔接手段，内容连贯，前后照应，层次分明，易于理解。字数符合要求。

但本文个别地方表达不明确，如while subscription number only increased from around 0.5 billion to 1 billion，其主语应当是developed countries。