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Directions:

     Write an e-mail of about 100 words to a foreign teacher in your college, inviting him/her to be a judge for the upcoming English speech contest.

     You should include the details you think necessary.

Dear Prof. Smith,

    On behalf of the “Talents” English Speech Contest committee, I’m writing to invite you to be our new judge. As the core part of our “Foreign Culture Festival”, this school-wide contest is due to be held in the Students’ Auditorium on May 12(next Sunday), and we believe that you can give our competitors some enlightening comments as both a native-English speaker and knowledgeable professor. To be more specific, the event will start at around 7:00 p.m., and last for 2 hours at most. At the end of it, we will have some hand-made presents for each judge and competitor.

    Once again, we sincerely hope you can be the judge for our competition. RSVP before this weekend.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Chairman of the “Talents” Speech Contest

阅卷组评语：

    该文得分10分，很好地完成了试题规定的任务要求：

1．  格式和语域恰当；

2．  包含所有内容要点，如邀请、比赛时间和地点，主题等；

3．  使用了丰富的词汇和正确的语法；

4．  采用了有效的衔接手段，行文自然流畅，层次分明；

能对目标读者产生预期的交际效果。