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如何在高考英语书面表达中运用复杂结构

(2007-10-20 16:52:03)
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   现行的《考试说明》中,关于高考英语书面表达评分标准第五档(很好)中有这样一段话:“应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。” 这就是说,学生仅运用基础的词汇和基本的句型,不能体现出较强的语言运用能力,即使表达无语法错误,也不能得高分;相反有些错误,目的在有意识地使用复杂结构或较高级词汇,也不扣分,仍属于最高档次。高考把写作要求提到了这样一个高度,有利于反映学生的水平层次,有利于指导教学。原来的“要点完整,语言无误,行文连贯,表达清楚”的标准就落后了。

    在平时的教学中,同学们最习惯的是五种基本句型:①主语+谓语;②主语+谓语+宾语;③主语+谓语+间接宾语;④主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语;⑤主语+谓语+宾语+补足语。用这些句型组织的句子单一而无生气,一看像小学生作文,不能给人一种含金量较高的审美享受。根据新说明的要求,本文拟就此进行讨论,希望能达到启迪思维,举一反三,开拓创新的目的。

    首先,在整篇作文中,力图避免只使用一两个句型,避免都用些“中规中矩”的陈述句,要灵活运用各种句式和多种语法结构,这样才能使文章有声有色,同时也给阅卷教师留下深刻而美好的印象,从而在高考作文中获得高分。举例如下:

   一、改变时态并使用倒装

   例:The bell is ringing now.(一般)  There goes the bell! (高级)

   二、改变语态

   例:People suggest that the conference be put off.(一般)

   It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级)

   三、使用不定式

   例:He is so kind that he can help me.(一般)

   He is so kind as to help me.(高级)

   四、使用过去分词并进行省略

   例:①She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(一般)

   Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.(高级)

   ②Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten.(一般)

   Once seen, it can never be forgotten.(高级)

   ③Don’t speak until you are spoken to.(一般)

   Don’t speak until spoken to.(高级)

   五、使用V-ing形式

   例:①When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.(一般)

   On arriving/his arrival, please give me an e-mail.(高级)

   ②If the weather permits, I'll come tomorrow.(一般)

   I'll come tomorrow, weather permitting.(高级)

   六、使用名词性从句

   例:①It disappointed everybody that he didn't turn up.(一般)

   The fact that he didn't turn up disappointed everybody.(高级)

   ②I happened to have met him.(一般) It happened that I had met him.   (高级)

   ③To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.(一般)

   What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.(高级)

   七、使用定语从句

   例:The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written.(一 般)

   The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.(高级)

   八、使用状语从句

   例:①I won't believe what he says.(一般)

   No matter what he says, I won't believe.(高级)

   ②If you come back before six o'clock, you can go out.(一般)

   You can go out on condition that(provided that) you come back before   six o'clock.(高级)

   ③If she doesn't agree, what shall we do?(一般)

   Supposing that she doesn't agree, what shall we do?(高级)

   九、使用虚拟语气

   例:We must take some measures to solve the problem. (一般)

   ①Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.(高级)

   还有更多句型:

   ②Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.

   ③Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.

   十、使用with结构或独立主格结构

   例:The teacher took a book and came into the classroom.(一般)

   The teacher came in with a book in his hand.(高级)

   The teacher came in, book in hand.(高级)

   十一、副词表动词意义

   例:①I am going to home(in order)to bring/ fetch some money next   Friday. (一般) 

   I am going to home for money next Friday.(高级)

   又如:②The child pull at its mother’s coat for more chocolate.那孩子拉着妈妈的衣服还要巧克力。

   ③The dog was going around for food. 那狗在到处寻食

   ④When the mother saw/ read her son’s school report, she was disappointed.(一般)

   The mother was diappointed at her son’s school report.(高级)

   十二、使用形象的动词

   例:①I had a good idea.(一般)

   A good idea struck me.(高级)

    ②I forgot it for the moment.(一般)

   It slipped from my mind.(高级)

   ③Jim went over to sit down on the couch quickly.(一般)

   Jim threw himself down on the couch.(高级)

   还有:④The name Harvey Carlson rings a bell.

   ⑤July13, 2001 saw a very bright night in Beijing that will never fade from memory.

    老师本来喜欢用以上的一些句型来考我们的,现在我们自己写出来了,你说老师该多高兴!希望同学们做有心人,平时多抄录、多总结、多背诵一些优美的、高级的句子,既能在高考作文中得高分,也为大学的英语学习打下良好的基础。(参阅英语写作网)

 

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