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卡明斯：人类我爱你

 

人类我爱你
因为你更愿去涂黑
成功的靴子而不去问谁的灵魂悬挂在他的
表链上因为这样会让

 

双方尴尬也因为你
毫不犹豫为所有
包含祖国家园和
母亲这样词汇的歌曲鼓掌只要是在老地方上演

 

人类我爱你因为
当你穷困时你会抵押你的
智识去买一杯饮料而当
你富足时骄傲会让你

 

离当铺远远的并且
因为你一直持续地在招惹
麻烦但是更多地
尤其地是在你自己家里

 

人类我爱你因为你
永远都把生活的
秘密放在裤子里然后忘了
它在那儿就坐了下去

 

坐在它上面
并且因为你
永远都坐在死亡的大腿上
造诗人类呀

 

我恨你

 

[注：大小写无法翻译，断句也无法翻译，e.e.cummings最有创意的地方都难表现了，呵呵。附原文，old howard是个地名，没查出来，暂且如此。]

 

e.e. cummings - Humanity i love you 

 

Humanity i love you
because you would rather black the boots of
success than enquire whose soul dangles from his
watch-chain which would be embarrassing for both

 

parties and because you
unflinchingly applaud all
songs containing the words country home and
mother when sung at the old howard

 

Humanity i love you because
when you're hard up you pawn your
intelligence to buy a drink and when
you're flush pride keeps

 

you from the pawn shops and
because you are continually committing
nuisances but more
especially in your own house

 

Humanity i love you because you
are perpetually putting the secret of
life in your pants and forgetting
it's there and sitting down

 

on it
and because you are
forever making poems in the lap
of death Humanity

 

i hate you