2019年全国II卷英语作文（分析及例文）

第二节 书面表达

假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：1.比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.表达期待。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

命题意图解析：全国II卷书面表达部分设置了考生作为学校排球队队长写信告知队员近期活动安排的情境，在具体的体育情境中考查考生书面表达能力。这些语篇及所设置的相关试题在考查阅读理解或英语语言综合运用能力的同时，体现了关注体育锻炼、倡导健康意识的理念。

失分原因分析及对策：

1.     基础较差，不注意初中基础知识复习的学生不会写volleyball这个关键词。

   对策：加强系统复习，注意初中常用长词的听写。

2.     不喜欢课外活动的学生缺乏具体生活体验，对于比赛信息和赛前准备缺乏理解。

   对策：鼓励学生积极参加课外活动，注重阅读积累。尤其是写作训练要鼓励学生头脑风暴，发表个人见解，积累生活常识。

3.     语言表达能力欠缺，语言功底太差不能流畅地组织自己的语言。

   对策：一轮复习认真安排写作训练，注意单句翻译训练，提升学生语言素养。

例文（一）20分水平

Dear Chris，

 I am writing to inform you to join us to play a volleyball match this weekend．

Aiming to enhance our relation with neighbouring school and build up our bodies，we are to hold this game. As is scheduled，the match will take place at 8：00am on Saturday on the playground of our school.(P1.告知比赛信息)

It is significant for us to do some training before the match, so regular exercise is a must everyday. Besides,healthy eating and enough rest allow us to remain a good state. What matters is our involvement. Thus, your attendance is greatly expected．（P2 提醒赛前准备）

I am sure we can make many new friends through this actitivity, and enjoy ourselves as well. Hope you won't miss the joyful activity.（P3表达期待）

Yours,

Li Hua

例文（二）22分水平

Dear Chris,

Having completedNational Collage Entrance Examination, relaxed and thrilled,I am writing to inform you of the news that we are going to go for a volleyball match at the local stadium at 7 p.m. tomorrow

Trust me! It must be a fantastic game,where we will play against the exchange students from Poland. What a golden activity it is, because not only can we enjoy ourselves after the tight life in Grade 3, but we can also learn from the team which is from title, Poland.

So do be well-prepared!Have a good rest, wear your comfortable sports shoes and clothes avoid injuring yourself. What matters most is to practice at 4 p.m. tomorrow.

Such a wonderful opportunity is it that you can’t miss it! Looking forward to your coming!

例文（二）解析

【Having completed National Collage Entrance Examination, relaxed and thrilled,现在分词做状语】I am writing to inform you of the news （that we are going to go for a volleyball match at the local stadium at 7 p.m. tomorrow同位语从句）.

Trust me! It must be a fantastic game,（where we will play against the exchange students from Poland非限定性定语从句）. What a golden activity it is感叹句, because not only can we enjoy ourselves after the tight life in Grade 3, but we can also learn from the team （which is from title冠军, Poland）.【倒装句和定语从句】

So do be well-prepared!【强调句】Have a good rest, wear your comfortable jersey and avoid food that makes you sick. What matters most is to practice at 4 p.m. tomorrow.【主语从句】

Such a wonderful opportunity is it that you can’t miss it!【倒装句】 Looking forward to your coming!

             Yours,

             LiHua

     希望对大家有所帮助，愿我们2020年的备考做得更好。