加载中…杜甫《春日忆李白》英译三题
(2017-06-08 15:29:12)杜甫《春日忆李白》英译三题
（曾冲明2017年6月8日）
白也诗无敌，飘然思不群。
清新庾开府，俊逸鲍参军。
渭北春天树，江东日暮云。
何时一尊酒，重与细论文。一
曾冲明评押韵：八行中，1行与8行单音押韵与（甚至与6行单音押韵）；2行与3行单音押韵（甚至与7行单音押韵）；如果the
rare excellence of Adjutant Bao.改成Adjutant Bao
has
the rare
excellence，则4行与5行也单音押韵。请看：
Burton Watson 译：
On a Spring Day Thinking of Li
Bai
Li Bai—poems unrivaled,
thought soaring airborne, never
banal:
the freshness, newness of Yu the
Commander,
the rare excellence of Adjutant
Bao.1
Here by the northern Wei, springtime
trees;
east of the Yangzi, clouds at the close
of day—
when will we share a cask of
wine,
once more debate the subtleties of the
written word?曾冲明研读注释如下：
曾冲明研读与注释：
白也诗无敌，飘然思不群。
清新庾开府，俊逸鲍参军。
渭北春天树，江东日暮云。
何时一尊酒，重与细论文。
Burton Watson 译：
On a Spring Day Thinking of Li
Bai
Li Bai—poems
unrivaled（无敌的）,
thought（思想） soaring（翱翔，高飞） airborne（adj.
[航] 空运的；空气传播的；风媒的）, never banal（adj.陈腐的； 平庸的；）:
the freshness, newness of Yu the
Commander（指挥者）,
the rare excellence of Adjutant（n.
副官，助手） Bao.1
Here by the northern Wei, springtime
trees;
east of the Yangzi, clouds at the close
of day—
when will we share a cask（n. 木桶，桶） of
wine,
once more debate （vt. 辩论，争论，讨论）the
subtleties（n. 微妙；敏锐） of the written word?
杜甫《春日忆李白》新译初稿
（曾冲明2017年6月8日）：
春日忆李白
杜甫
白也诗无敌，飘然思不群。
清新庾开府，俊逸鲍参军。
渭北春天树，江东日暮云。
何时一尊酒，重与细论文。
Thinking of Li Bai on a Spring Day
Du Fu
The great poet Li Bai is so that unrivaled;
The thoughts of poems soar free in the air.
The freshness is like that of poet Yu Xin;
The newness like that of poet Bao Zhao.
I'm by the riverside of northern Wei in spring
He's east of the Yangzi with evening clouds.
When will we share a cup of wine togather,
And discuss or debate our poems once more ?
（曾冲明2017年6月8日）：
白也诗无敌，飘然思不群。
清新庾开府，俊逸鲍参军。
渭北春天树，江东日暮云。
何时一尊酒，重与细论文。
Thinking of Li Bai on a Spring Day
The great poet Li Bai is so that unrivaled;
The thoughts of poems soar free in the air.
The freshness is like that of poet Yu Xin;
The newness like that of poet Bao Zhao.
I'm by the riverside of northern Wei in spring
He's east of the Yangzi with evening clouds.
When will we share a cup of wine togather,
And discuss or debate our poems once more ?
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