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李白《夜宿山寺》英译对比资料
（曾冲明2014年7月17日补充）
      夜宿山寺
             李白  
危楼高百尺，
手可摘星辰。
不敢高声语，
恐惊天上人。

海外逸士译：
       Lodge in a Temple on the Hill for the Night
                   by Li Bai of Tang Dynasty
The towering building, a hundred ells high;
I can almost pick the stars with hands bare.
To speak aloud I really do not dare,
Afraid to disturb people living in the sky.

龚景浩译：
    Staying Overnight in a Mountain Temple
                      Li Bai
Its tower is one hundred feet high.
You could reach out and pluck a star.
We all spoke in hushed voices,
Lest we disturb the folks up above.

网上译者署名“冷杉”：
    A Night Stay In A Mountain Temple
I climb on top of the temple tower,
So high I could almost pick a constellation.
Here I'm careful not to speak louder,
Lest I disturb the holy ones in heaven.

无心剑译多稿：
稿一
The tower is so high into the cloud
That I could pick the stars by hand.
Alas! I really dare not speak aloud
To scare gods in the heavenly land.
稿二
On this tower so high,
I feel the stars so nigh!
How dare I speak loud
To sturt gods on cloud!
稿三
      A Night in a Temple on hill   
On this tower infinitely high
I can pick the stars from the sky.
O, I even dare not speak loud
Lest I'd disturb the gods on cloud.

黎历译：
     Stay Overnight At The Temple Of Hill
Towering temple is hundreds feet high
A reaching hand can pick stars in sky
No one dares to give loud talk a try
For fear of scaring souls in heaven shy

北京土著译：
A Night at a Mountain Temple 
       By Li bai    
The tower stands one hundred feet high.
One could reach for a star and pick it.
We dare not speak loud,
And afraid to bother those high above us.

网上未见署名：
       Lodge in mountain temple for the nigh　                            
                             ----Li Po, Tang dynast
Towering temple stands so high,
Allowing my pick stars hard by,
No loud speak at all,
Lest it might frighten people in sky.

译者未见署名：
The Summit Temple　　 
　　Li Bai　　 
A hundred feet high the Summit Temple stands,　　 
Where I could pluck the stars with my own hands.　　 
At dead of night I dare not speak aloud　　 
For fear of waking dwellers in the cloud.

曾冲明译：
      Lodging at Temple in Hill Overnight 
               by Li Bai
The temple's built on peak so high
That I could  pick up stars by hand. 
I dare not even to speak out aloud
To disturb the creature in the sky.