谢谢大家踊跃提供答案。

我觉得bbb~的答案比较全面，就把她的贴在这里，作为标准答案：

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哈哈，想象不出蜜瓜穿上流光溢彩的闪闪发光的LG送的花裙子傻样 -因子- (30 bytes) (18 reads) 11/24/09

 

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•  I don't dare to wear. It will be broken... -汉代蜜瓜- ♀ (7 bytes) (7 reads) 11/24/09

(1) wear 用来指“穿衣”的时候是及物动词，所以应该是“I don’t dear to wear it.” 不及物动词wear 是别的意思。衣服破损应该用torn, worn 或者rip，而不是broken. 根据上下文这里最好的说法是“It will rip.”

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• I have taken a glance, give some idea under your post and  gave you QQH aready -汉代蜜瓜- ♀(19 bytes) (27 reads) 11/18/09 

 (2) Glance是匆匆一瞥，看别人的帖子应该不止一瞥，至少也look了一下，否则也太不尊重了吧：） 而且过去式应该更好，“I took a look”. 紧跟着后面应该是同样的时态，所以give应该是gave. Give 的用法应该是give somebody something 或者give something to somebody, 这里少了somebody. 给别人建议是给suggestion，而不是idea. QQH是send的，而不是give的。所以综合起来是“gave you some suggestions and sent you QQH already”.

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 Guys, thank you for your following up!! -汉代蜜瓜- ♀ (0 bytes) (6 reads) 11/17/09 

 (3) 这里想说的中文意思大概是“谢谢大家跟贴”，但follow up 词组有特别的意思，经常被用到的意思是“to increase the effectiveness of by further action or repetition”，我想不出合适的中文翻译，也许是因为中国人不follow up? :-) 跟贴可以翻译成“follow up post”, 所以可以说“Thank you for your follow up posts.”

（艾友友注：“跟帖”可以是“comment”或“reply”）

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• 不理解子沂 -(())- ♀ (134 bytes) (139 reads) 11/15/09

 

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• 翰辰 gave her a hit almost face to face -汉代蜜瓜- ♀  (0 bytes) (20 reads) 11/15/09

 

 (4) “face to face”是指面对面，“gave her a hit almost face to face”我基本不知所云，不知道她是不是想说“gave her a hit almost in the face”.

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Strong agree with you!!! -汉代蜜瓜- ♀ (0 bytes) (6 reads) 11/13/09 

 (5) 这个简单，修饰动词应该用副词而不是形容词，所以应该是“strongly agree with you”.

 

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• Brother, you need to know what's human's right -汉代蜜瓜- ♀ (189 bytes) (159 reads) 11/13/09 

(6) Know 后面应该跟名词或从句，人权是human right，一般泛指用复数，正确说法是“you need to know what human rights are”.