高考英语短文改错规律之【行文逻辑错误】
(2016-01-10 20:26:48)
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关联词及行文逻辑
考点1 关联词使用不当
[典例1] After looking at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.(2015·全国Ⅱ)
分析 句意为:他转过身发现父母不见了。由句意可知宾语从句句意完整,不缺少成分,所以应该用that引导从句或省略。故去掉where或将where改为that。
[典例2] There the air is clean or the mountains are green.(2015·全国Ⅰ)
分析 两个简单句之间为并列关系而非选择关系,所以将or改为and。
考点2 多余或缺少连词
[典例1] Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.(2014·新课标全国Ⅰ)
分析 在让步状语从句中,although不可以与but连用,因为although位于句首,故只能去掉but或将but改为yet。
[典例2] He had a deep voice,which set him apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.(2013·新课标全国Ⅰ)
分析 句中which引导的是定语从句,修饰主句He had a deep voice,而主句与从句后的分句he was strong and powerful之间缺少连词,根据他们的并列关系,确定he前加and。
考点3 介词与连词混用
[典例] In fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.(2013·新课标全国Ⅰ)
分析 句中during为介词,不可以连接两个独立谓语的句子,根据逻辑关系,后一个分句应为when引导的时间状语从句。故during应改为when。
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方法归纳 对于连词的考查,注意首先判断两个或两个以上的单词、短语或单句之间是否有连接词,再根据不同的句式结构,判断连接词是否运用正确。解题时,可以注意以下几个方面:,(1)把握前后两句话之间的衔接关系,判定是并列句、主语从句、定语从句还是状语从句,根据连接词在句中作何成分,判断正误。,(2)注意but转折、and并列、or或者(选择)、so因此(结果)等逻辑关系词之间的混用。,(3)注意although/though/while不与but连用;since/as/because不与so连用。,(4)注意but与and,and与or,or与so,after与before,which与that,which与what等连词的用法区别。 |

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