关于Do advantages outweigh disadvantages的写法
(2014-07-01 15:17:49)
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Do advantages outweigh disadvantages
或 discuss advantages and disadvantages
这样的题目:需要一段写优点,一段写缺点。具体段落安排是:如果你认为优点大于缺点,则优点放在倒数第二段。如果你认为缺点大于优点,那么缺点应放在倒数第二段,以便和你的结论一气呵成。
或者:如果认为有点大于缺点, 可以按照常规写法,第二段优点,第三段缺点. 但在描写缺点结尾的时候加些反驳, 这样也能和结尾逻辑上连起来.
讨论优点与缺点,积极与消极,不可避免地会用到转折。
转折的几种写法。会用即可。
(1)单纯转折
1. But a quick look at the facts shows a different picture (Transition).(展示不一样的画面,即和上一段落的陈述相反。如果前面说好的一面,则这里说的就是坏的一面) First, energy and other natural resources have become more abundant, not less so. Second,。。。。
2. Yet, there is a dark(坏的一面) (or: positive 或:积极的一面) side to this picture: despite (in spite of)our progress, half of the world’s population still suffers, with the water services inferior to those available to the ancient Greeks and Romans. Preventable water-diseases kill an estimated 10,000 to 20,000 children every day, and the latest evidence suggests that we are falling behind in efforts to solve these problems.
(2)转折+递进
1. The consequences may extend beyond jeopardising human health.(坏的一面的延续。)即,不仅破坏人们身体健康, 还。。。。
2. 讲问题的时候,还可以这样表达:Unfortunately, missing out on the benefits of literature is not the only problem.。A 不是唯一的问题,那么接着谈的就是另一个问题了。逻辑通顺。

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