高考英语短文改错专题教学设计

朱元德

教学内容：短文改错

授课班级：高三（2）班

授课时间：2018.11.05

教学目标：使学生掌握改错命题的规律，从而有效的进行学习

教学重点：改错中常出的几种题型

教学难点:  知识的迁移能力的培养 

教学方法：1、任务学习法  2、合作学习法

教学工具：黑板，课件，多媒体

教学过程：

Step、引入 

考纲解读、做题要求、高考短文改错的考察方式 

Step、短文改错要领 

动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别，介词短语要记住；

句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注。

Step、短文改错考点内容及典型错词类型分析归纳 

一、短文改错常见错考点：

1.谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点，常见动词错误类型有：

一般现在时与一般过去时错用；

and前后动词时态不一致；

主谓不一致；

缺少动词,特别是be动词；

第三人称单数形式错用；

主动语态和被动语态错用。

2.名词的常见错误：

单复数名词错用；可数名词与不可数名词错用；名词与形容词：

health(healthy),wealth(wealthy),safety(safe),luck(lucky),difficulty(difficult),honesty

(honest), to one’s surprise(surprised), of importance(important)

3. 冠词错误：不可数名词误用a/an；复数名词一般不加the ；an / a:

an  A / E / F /H / I / L /M / N /O/ R/ S / X in the word, 

an hour/ honor / honest child, an MP3 player, an NBA game, an MBA

a used car, a university, a European country, a one-thousand-dollar check

4. 形容词和副词错误：

词性转化：real—really,especial—especially,fortunate—fortunately,lucky—luckily,

词义转化：however—therefore, hard--hardly, late—lately—later

词形转化：too—either

比较级：as---as (原级比较),---than (比较级),

much/even/still/far/rather/a lot可修饰比较级

--ly的形容词：lively, likely, friendly,lovely,brotherly, lonely

so与such

so good a book = such a good book

so many/much/few/little + n. (不用such)

5. 代词错误：

代词的主格和宾格（I/me；he/him；she/her；we/us；they/them）错误；

反身代词（myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves）使用错误；

代词的单数和复数使用错误(it/them, one/ones)；

多代词或少代词（it,one）

不定代词：both/all, none/neither, something/anything/everything, some/any,

someone/anyone/everyone,

6. 介词错误：

词组中的介词误用；

介词意思理解偏差；(with/without)

介词的多用或少用(yesterday, today, tonight, tomorrow, 以及last,this,next 修饰时间名词，前不加介词)

7. 连词错误：

状语从句：when(突然)/while (而)；if/unless；before/after

定语从句：that/which, who/whose

名词性从句：that/what,why/because/that

并列句：and/but/or

感叹句：what / how

8.非谓语动词的常见错误：

不定式、动名词作主语时；

and连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致（尤其距离较远时）；

介词后用动名词形式作宾语；

某些动词后要求接动名词或不定式；

副词性V-ing/V-ed区分（作状语）

形容词性V-ing/V-ed区分（作定语、表语、补语）

9. 冗词的多用:

(1)   英语和汉语在某些方面的表达差异是常考点之一 .

(2)  某些从句引导词的误用.

(3)  某些固定表达结构的误用.

Step、解题步骤 

（1）整体把握短文大意。 

（2）逐句分析，把握结构。 

（3）粗略分析词法、句法、逻辑上是否有问题。  

（4）逐行修改，先易后难。

（5）复读全文，验证答案。

（6）要注意答题是否合乎规范。 

Step、实战演练

Step、小结和作业

1. The bike outside my house is belonged to tom .

2. When our six children were young, suppertime is always being interrupted.

3. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library .

4. Bill was standing at the side of the car , talking to two men who was helping him to repair it .

 5. I from quanzhou, Fujian Province.

   6. They by bike to school.

7. Your knowledges of Greece can help the whole class .

8. He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests .

9. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful .

10. They have made a great progress.

11. What a good weather!

12. You have to keep your things in the order.

13.He is real a determined person.

14.We are deep moved by his words.

15. They came back lately and had some tea .

16. They threw all their equipment into the water to make the balloon light.

17. He made such many mistakes that he was scolded by his teacher.

18. Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to save themselves.

     19. I read your e-mail and showed them to my parents.

  20. I hope that both you two could come and visit us some time soon.

21. I could hardly see everything in the thick fog.

22. They found difficult to follow what the teacher said.

23. When a young man starts to earn his own living,he can no longer expect others to pay his food.

24. He came across a friend on yesterday.

25.30 percent of girls would like to become teachers when only 5 percent of boys want to do this job.

26. Jack is my classmate, who bike got lost yesterday.

27. Lucy fell ill. That’s because she was absent.

28. Lucy was absent. That’s why she fell ill.

29.Lucy was absent. The reason is because she fell ill.

30.He and she should make the class very active by joking with the students.

31.If you work hard, and you will get a better result.

32.They wanted one child or another to come out and played.

33.I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person

34.The old couple got their house repairing last month.

35.Last summer ,I went to Beijing, my first time trip to the city.

36.Two years later, he returned back home.

37.Though I love my life, but it hasn’t been lots of fun as I’ve been ill for 28 years.

38.Because he was always late for work, so he was fired finally.