今天给大家分享的是2022年5月21日的雅思大作文机经及范文解析。

5月21日雅思大作文题目：

 

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【话题分类】

社会类

【题目解析】

题目大意：研究表明每个人都想用于一台私家车、电视机和冰箱。题目要求考生表达“这个趋势优点是否大于缺点”。

 

这个题目属于“优劣势题型”中“outweigh”类型，故考生需要明确表达“优大于劣”或“劣大于优”的观点，同时使用2:1的方式进行写作。

笔者认为“优大于劣”，故主体段3段，写两个优点和一个缺点。

 考生需要注意的是，在让步段中不能写“反驳”，因为一个段落有且只有一个中心。

 

【写作思路】

开头段-题目改写 + 个人观点（优大于劣）

主体段1-优点1

主体段2-优点2

主体段3-缺点1

结尾段-重申观点 + 总结主体3个段中的理由

【参考范文】

Nowadays, each individual desires to have various products, such as a private vehicle, a television set, and a refrigerator. Personally, I am inclined to the view that the merits of this trend prevail over the downsides. 

The major benefit is that people can have an easy and enjoyable life. If they possess a car, they can freely reach destinations where public transport is unavailable. Using a refrigerator allows them to store foods for days, preventing unnecessary waste, and meanwhile makes it possible for people to have cold beverages on scorching summer days. Watching television programmes helps people unwind after they have been working or studying all day.

Another advantage is that the economy will be boosted. With the increasing demand for a range of products, a considerable number of workers are required for mass manufacturing, which creates many job vacancies and increases the employment rate. More excise taxes will also be generated when more products are purchased, which becomes a vital source of government revenue, and the authorities can make use of the money to stimulate a wider variety of business activities. 

However, the disadvantages are also obvious, one of which is that environmental degradation can be a public concern. At the production phase, excessive quantities of raw materials, including trees and rubber, will be unsustainably exploited. Irresponsible factories may also discharge contaminated unprocessed water into waterways and emit toxic gases to pollute the air. At the disposal stage, these products will more or less pose a threat to nature no matter how they are dealt with. 

In conclusion, I believe there are more positive influences than negative ones if everyone owns a car and other appliances. Despite the damage that using and disposing of these products may cause to the environment, people will be assisted to lead their lives in an easy fashion and an economic growth can be achieved. 

(311 words)

 

【亮点词汇及短语】
1.desire (v.) 想要

2.possess (v.) 拥有

3.destination (n.) 目的地

4.public transport 公共交通

5.allow sb. to do sth 允许某人做某事

6.store (v.) 储存

7.prevent (v.) 防止

8.… makes it possible for sb. to do sth. 使某人有可能做某事

9.beverage (n.) 饮料

10.scorching (adj.) 灼热的

11.help sb unwind 帮助某人放松

12.the economy 经济

13.boost (v.) 促进

14.demand for 对…的需求

15.a range of 各种各样的

16.a considerable number of 大量的

17.mass manufacturing 大规模生产

18.creates job vacancies 创造工作岗位

19.the employment rate 就业率

20.excise taxes 消费税

21.purchase (v.) 购买

22.government revenue 政府收入

23.the authorities 政府；执政部门

24.make use of 利用

25.stimulate (v.) 刺激

26.business activities 商业活动

27.environmental degradation 环境破坏

28.a public concern 公众担忧

29.raw materials 原材料

30.be unsustainably exploited 被不可持续地开采

31.discharge (v.) 排放

32.contaminated (adj.) 有污染的

33.waterways (n.) 水路

34.emit toxic gases 排放有毒气体

35.disposal (n.) 处理

36.pose a threat to 对…构成威胁

37.nature (n.) 自然；环境

38.deal with 处理

39.appliances (n.) 家用电器

40.cause damage to 对…造成破坏

41.dispose of 处理

42.in a/an … fashion 以…方式

43.economic growth 经济增长

44.environmentally-friendly (adj.) 环保的

 

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