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2014年9月6日雅思真题写作范文

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2014年9月6日雅思范文

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李晓芳雅思

大城市年轻人的问题

公众平台号ieltswt

TASK 2  With major cities continue growing, are there any problems to young people? How to solve these problems?


分析:此题同2010年8月14日考题:The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in cities are facing with? Give solutions to these problems.

原因不多说,接下来考试的烤鸭们,写作要练习真题,一定要练-真-题!


Sample Answer by Amy


鉴于Amy一向呼吁烤鸭们积累雅思写作phrases("词伙"也好),现特将文中的常用词组给highlight出来,供大家参考。好吧,下面请你睁大眼睛,have a close look:)遇到好东西要及时收入囊中http://www/uc/myshow/blog/misc/gif/E___6724EN00SIGG.gif


Although rapid urbanization creates opportunities for young people, it brings various challenges for them as well. This essay will analyze the problems faced by the youth and also put forward some proposals to deal with these issues.

 

The fast-paced urban life causes immense pressure for young people. First, with the population continue growing in cities, competition for decent jobs is keen and young people are obliged to spend the vast majority of their time at work. Working overtime and commuting devour too much of their daily time, leaving them no chance for family bonding. Having no time to cook, they eat unhealthy fast foods. Being too busy to exercise, they lead a sedentary life that can be damaging to their physical posture. All of these can make young people suffer both physically and psychologically. Another difficulty for the young residents is the soaring costs of living. In metropolitans like London and New York where the property prices are skyrocketing, many young people cannot afford an apartment and they have to spend a large portion of the salary on the rent. Once the young lose their jobs and the source of income to support themselves, they tend to resort to illegal means like robbery or turn to drugs. It is a fact that when the unemployment rate of young people rises, the rate of youth crimes increases.

 

To tackle these problems requires concerted efforts of both individual and the society. First, young people should relentlessly improve themselves so that they can be more competitive in the job market. Since nowadays competition is getting fierce in every aspect of life, the young should face the reality and get prepared for the challenges. They should be advised to lower unrealistic expectations and embark on some seemingly more fundamental work. Second, the local communities are also supposed to play an active role. For example, in US, regular job skills workshops and entrepreneurship training are provided in public libraries. Also, preferential policies in the areas of taxation and credit should be made by the governments to support the young graduates to start their own business.

 

In conclusion, it is true that young people in major cities are facing numerous challenges. However, these problems can be addressed as long as young people are ready to make changes and the governments take measure to encourage them to get employed or self-employed.(By Amy)

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