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2014年5月17日雅思真题写作范文

(2014-05-21 02:01:34)
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儿童看电视利弊分析

Children can learn effectively from watching television. Therefore children should be encouraged to watch television regularly both at home and at school.Do you agree or disagree?

很多童鞋一看到题目中的children,watching television就窃喜,觉得运气实在太好了。Amy也认为17日参加考试的孩子们确实该高兴一把。稍微提醒一下就是要结合辩题的中心即孩子们是否能通过看电视有效学习来讨论。下面是Amy第一时间写下的范文,供大家参考。

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I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent in front of TV both at home and at school. This is partly because sitting in front of the screen for too long can be damaging for both eyes and the physical posture of a young child, or even resulting in obesity, regardless of what contents they are watching. (因为这个话题实在是太平常了,此处省略一般开头段套路中的背景描述加改写题目,直奔主题陈述观点)

 

Another concern is the unfavourable influence on the growth of young students, both mentally and psychologically. For instance, watching TV too much distracts children from their study, as they often lack sufficient self-discipline and can easily be addicted to play series. Besides, unlike reading, which can help children develop their imagination and independent thinking, children who watch TV absorb information passively, leading to the decline of their creativity.The most serious thing is that there is too much violence and porn on TV nowadays, which is largely responsible for the increasingly aggressive behaviour of teenagers according to researchers.

 

In spite of this, the obvious benefits of watching TV regularly, particularly watching those informative and educational programs, cannot be denied. First, children now live in a changing and fast-paced society and they need to be informed of the latest knowledge. Focusing on current affairs help them keep abreast of times and watching news around the world frequently broadens their horizon. Also, some scientific programs like Discovery or Geography are good source of inspiration and may open the door of wisdom and arouse learning interest in the young minds.

 

I think the main point here is not to ban or discourage children from watching TV completely, but to make sure that they do not watch too much TV or watch TV indiscriminately. Therefore it is strongly suggested that children spend a limited time in front of TV. Besides, parents and teachers should give guidance to children as for the contents they are watching. (By Amy)

 

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