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2014年4月12日雅思写作范文

(2014-04-16 03:08:41)
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雅思写作真题范文

教育的目的及功能

Task2: Some say the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be useful to society. Others say the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
教育的目的是为社会准备有用的人才(个体)还是让个人实现自己的抱负?

题目解析:
关于教育的目的和功能的讨论,应该是考得比较多属于比价“古老传统”的话题。看看童鞋的思路跟Amy有什么不一样。欢迎各位一起探讨!

总的来说,Amy 认为教育的首要任务是让个人得到全方位的发展,也就是西方一直宣扬的so-called personality development. 让人们通过受教育知道个人的生命和存在对自己和他人的意义,在追求这种价值的过程中,个人的抱负得以实现,并且也让个人能够获取真正意义上的快乐。当然,在此基础上,个人通过利他行为对身边的社会产生积极的影响,从而成为responsible and useful social member.

那么,作为一道雅思写作题,我们又该如何布局谋篇呢?以下是Amy的想法,大家参考:

To achieve personal ambitions:
一些人认为受教育的终极目的就是让个人抱负得以充分实现。首先,通过教育的启发和引导,个体慢慢发现自己的兴趣和志向所在。通过不断地接受教育,人们才可能在自己热爱的领域深究下去,并通过不懈的努力最后学有所成。比如,在很多西方国家,孩子们从小被允许尽情地探索大自然,有很多孩子从小就对自然科学产生了浓厚的兴趣,在老师的引导下,他们将来很可能成为一个植物学家或者通过自己的设计让人们生活更便捷的工程师。因此,在教育过程中,只要个体个性得以充分尊重和发展,他们就会走出自己的人生轨迹并实现自己的理想。在追逐理想的过程中,他们找到了生命对自己和他人的意义,从而获得了真正意义上的快乐。

To prepare individuals to be useful to society:
另一方面,很多人认为教育主要目的是为社会发展输送有用的个体。众所周知,让公民受教育是一个文明社会或政府的重要使命(或义务),因为社会的发展需要各行各业的精英们的贡献。因此,很容易理解,社会投入大量的资金到教育上,是希望未来的接班人能够学有所成,并将自己的聪明才智发挥出来,把社会建设得更美好。例如,在一些西方发达国家以及一些新兴的发展中国家,政府对各层次的教育比如基础教育、职业教育以及高等教育都有大量的投入。而这些国家经济发达、社会稳定、人们高水平的物质和精神生活也正是建立在各路专业人才的贡献基础之上的。

conclusion:

在我看来,教育的首要目的是让个体的个性得以充分发展,通过个性的全面发展,个人抱负得以实现。在追求个人志向过程中,个体对他人以及社会都会产生积极的影响,最终,一个个不同的个体的才智得以充分发挥,从而也让整个社会受益。

Sample Answer

The discussion about the purpose of education has been going on for literally thousands of years, but no conclusions have been drawn. Basically, there are two viewpoints about the primary goal of education. One is to achieve individual's ambition and the other is to train skillful professionals for the society.

 

The reasons why many believe that education makes it possible for individuals to fulfill their dreams are fairly clear. First, by learning new knowledge, one can be inspired and gradually spot the area he has passion in. Also, with the right guidance and ideal educational facilities, one can have opportunity to delve into the field he is deeply interested in. For example, children who are encouraged to explore the nature in their own way without any restrictions in their childhood are more likely to develop a strong interest in Science like Botany. Therefore, Combining the systematic and thorough training he received in his specialty and his own efforts, one can realize his ambition of being a botanist. Moreover, in pursuing one's dream, one can certainly realize the significance of his life to himself and to others, which is the real source of happiness.

 

On the other hand, some believe the ultimate aim of education is to provide useful individuals for the society. It is widely acknowledged that the government has an obligation to guarantee its citizens' right to education. As a society cannot develop without every social member's efforts, it is understandable that the society wish to get the return from its investment on thousands of young men and women who are supposed to be the main force in its future development. Many western countries and some emerging developing regions, for instance, allocate a large proportion of their financial budget to various levels of education including basic, vocational and higher education every year. It is due to the contribution from those talents from all walks of life that people in these countries can enjoy high-level civilization and abundance.

 

In my opinion, the essence of education should be individual's personality education and only by respecting and developing each individual's personality can educators help them achieve their aspirations. And in the process of fulfilling one's real ambition, the education one receives can benefit both himself and the whole society in a much wider sphere.(By Amy)

 

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