2011年雅思A类TASK2分类点评之二(下)
(2012-07-01 12:28:15)
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雅思写作大作文教育2011雅思真题学费谁负担数学和哲学成功的特质 |
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解析:此题是旧题重现。可参考Amy之前写的《跟烤鸭们分享最实用的task2真题--学校教育》
以下范文供参考:
In the last decade, the funding
of higher education has become one of the most
heated
With a tendency to hold that higher education is no longer compulsory, many people then claim that it should be funded by students themselves instead of the government. This indeed reduces governments’ financial burden to a certain extent and it is argued that students’ motivation would be highly strengthened since they have paid a large amount of fees to obtain the access. But the downsides should not be neglected. This is mainly to say, the economically disadvantaged groups, for example, children of impoverished farmers in remote rural areas and laid-off workers in cities, may be put at an extreme disadvantage, and therefore should be assured of an equal chance to access the university education by the government.
Conversely, some people suggest that all the tuition fees should be paid by the government, thus enabling all its citizens, whether poor or rich, can have equal access to higher education. What is more, it is also a scheme to reduce the disparities between the two classes so as to enhance the social harmony. But opponents may refute this, pointing out that the government budget is never unlimited. While this is true, I tend to think that the limited budget should be prioritized and education of people should be the first priority.
Consequently, the third
approach---by government loan—seems to be the most practical one.
It allows the students, the impoverished ones in particular, to go
on with their further education in university regardless of their
economic status. Meanwhile, the government does not shoulder too
much financial burden beyond its capacities. Some people are
worried that there is still a risk that students who take out a
loan from government may refuse to pay back or be unable to keep up
with their loan repayment. I think this is less likely today when
the credit system of the state
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解析:本题谈到一个人要成功所具备的特质或者素质,是一个比较好写的话题。因为当今的社会从来都不缺乏对成功的关注以及对成功原因的分析。总结起来,无非包括创造力、想象力、毅力、勤奋、坚定正确的目标和严格的执行力等等。的确,客观地说,以上特质很多是没上过大学而从社会实践中摸爬滚打而走向成功的人士具备的,比如中途辍学的比尔、乔布斯等,因此我们可以得出结论:从社会这所大学里也能走出成功人士,因为成功的这些特质更多地需要人对自己的认知和战胜自我。
因此,我们应该做的不是一味贬低大学教育在未来成功中的作用(downplay the possible role of university education in future career success),而是建立或者改造出对学生未来成功更加有益的大学。毕竟,今天在全世界互联网公司里市值最高的Google的两名创始人—Larry Page与Sergey Brin,其实都持有名校的本科学位(虽然这两人读到PhD之后终于也还是光荣地辍学了)。
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解析:关于课程的设立和选择问题,依然属于教育话题范围之内。
课程本身有相对简单和困难之分,是否设为必修课主要看这些课程学习的意义。比如数学的学习就非常重要。Mathematics
is essential for one person both in terms of his or her personality
and in practical ways. For one thing, one’s ability in logical and
abstract thinking can be greatly developed when he or she is
understanding conceptions or
有些孩子感到某些课程难学,我们需要分析一下背后的原因,it is
wiser to first
所以,当孩子发现某一门学科困难时,学校和家长都应该仔细思考并多一些沟通。教师方面可以更进一步改进教学方法让孩子在学习过程中更容易接受领会知识,学校也可以根据学生的普遍实际情况将课程的难度适当降低。家长也应该鼓励孩子要克服学习上的困难,多投入一些思考,情况也许就会改变。总之,在决定是否改变课程之前,慎重的考虑是必须的。In short, serious consideration should be taken before making the decision of changing courses.
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一个国家迎接未来的最好方式就是投资更多的资源在年轻人身上。
解析:此题建议从正面论述。毋庸置疑,青年是国家的未来,投资在青年一代----未来的领导者身上无疑是明智的选择。少年强则国强。说到青年大家很容易想到的是教育。而投资教育除了修建美观、功能齐全的教学大楼以外,更要增加师资的投入。除了重点培养各个领域的顶尖人才以外,还要确保教育公平。不仅城市里的孩子拥有开眼看世界的机会,更要确保让所有适龄小孩都有学上,让有强烈求知欲望的学子不能因为家庭经济困难而在高等教育面前望而却步。