写完行者一，刚搁下笔，但思绪却未能停息，总感觉行者心声一，过于内敛和柔弱，字里行间到处都能嗅到书卷气、脂粉气，八股和西昆体的暗影左右了行者心声的魂魄。对于行者来说，刚性、张扬、豪迈、奔放、气魄才能突显他们的心声，行者心声二就是在这些因素的蛊惑下新生的。

                                         行者心声（2）            

                                     在海之滨

                          期待朝霞捧日出时的蓬勃

                          在雪域高原

                          守候晚霞落日园时的静默

                          在天涯海角

                          将豪情挥霍

                          在黑土地

                          把冰糖葫芦咬破

                          在沟里

                          看青云缭绕

                          在坡上

                          看苍穹空阔

                          在戈壁滩

                          驾车尽情穿越

                          在湖岸

                          留恋柔风吹皱的清波

                           在草原

                           拜访鲜艳的花朵

                           在茫茫林海中

                           将丰收的果实采获

                           在清幽处

                           让圣贤的智慧解破迷惑

                           在行走中

                           让疲惫与劳累滑落

                            在旅途中

                            将博爱放在心窝

                            在忘我时

                            牢记安全的重托

                            在回归时

                            将喜悦囊括

                            在追忆时

                            让美好永驻心窝