儿子开学了，不知道他还是否有时间续写他的这个故事，目前已完成七个章节，共4700多字，按他的话说，刚写了开头，难道他要写一个长篇小说不成？  

 

Chapter 5

They were on the way to the Stone Cove. The atomies told them that the Stone armies lived there.

“The atomies live in the Cove of Mouse for 9800 years. They can live about 500 years. They believe God Alu, the King of all the lives,” an atomy was telling Elisabeth about atomies, “They are good at making weapons. They… Orcs!”

“They are not only orcs! They are Fire Demons, the Ancient Demons!” yelled a knight.

“Watch out!” yelled Edwards.

“Can’t we kill it?” shouted Elisabeth.

“I will try!” yelled Mary. She shot at a Fire Demon but the arrows melted.

“We cannot hurt it!” yelled Edwards.

“Try to use the weapons of atomies!” yelled Elisabeth.

“It was melt by it!” yelled Mary when she shot at a Fire Demon by atomies arrow.

“Kill it! My dragon!” yelled a knight.

“AWWWWW!” the dragon spew out some fire and hit the demon.

“AAAAA,” yelled the knight. He used his lance to hit the demon.

“AWWWWWWWWWR,” shouted the demon. The orcs used their arrows to hit the dragon.

“AAAAAA,” yelled the knight. He pulled out the melting lance and used his sword to cut the demon’s neck.

“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!” shouted the Demon. It was killed by the knight and the orcs all ran away.

“It’s a good job,” said Elisabeth when the knight climbed down from the dying dragon, “I will find one (what one?) in Sidem when we go back and give it to you.”

“That is the Stone Cove, right?” said William.

“Yes, it is. Oh! The Fire Demons again!” yelled Elisabeth.

“They come to stop us!” yelled Edwards.

“Doesn’t Sandor get other things to stop us?” shouted William.

“We cannot kill them! They are much stronger than the ones we met before!” shouted the knight.

“The Fire Demons, you can’t melt us because we are made of stone!” the stone army all ran out from the cove and fought against the Fire Demons.

“We can help you, the person who holds the King’s sword!” said a stone man to Elisabeth.

“We were human beings who were working for Sandor, but in the Minadusidy Battle, we felt that Sandor was very evil so we didn’t fight for him. So he lost the battle. He was very angry to us and so he killed all of us, but he punished us to do not die. Cyrano killed Sandor but Sandor’s punishment didn’t stop. He turned us into stones before he died. But when he died, the punishment became weak and so we can walk and think. We wanted to find the way to destroy Sandor, so we were waiting for King’s sword.”

“I want to find the Unicorn’s Knights,” said Elisabeth, “so we need your help.”

“Ok,” said a stone man, “the stone man can do anything for their master!”

 “How many soldiers have we got?” asked Elisabeth.

“About 7000, I bit,” said William.

“Oh, we need more than 10000 soldiers to attack The Demon’s Cove,” said Elisabeth.

“You want to help Titan to escape from there!” said William, “we can! Look, we can get 5000 soldiers from the Unicorn’s Knight!”

“Ok, now our army will be much bigger!” said Elisabeth.

“Wait, what is that sound?” asked Edwards.

“Orcs!” yelled William.

“And also giant spiders!” yelled Mary.

“What are we waiting for!” yelled William, “let’s fight!”

“AWWWW,” yelled Edwards, “it’s really a big… Sandor!”

“He comes to stop us!” yelled Mary, she shoots Sandor.

“You are right,” yelled Sandor, “I will kill you all!”

“I will hit you!” yelled a stone man.

“And I will smash you into pieces!” shouted Sandor. He cut the stone man into half.

“AWWW,” yelled William. He ran to Sandor.

“YAAA,” yelled Sandor. He’s right arm was hit by William.

“AWWWW,” yelled William. His sword hit Sandor’s heart, and Sandor walked back.

“Aw,” said Sandor, “you… No!”

Elisabeth hit his left arm and cut off his hand.

“You cannot kill me! My bangle will not be easily cut!” yelled Sandor. He pulled out a gold stone.

“The Braun Stone, you can give me your greatest treasure!” he yelled.

Suddenly, the stone started to shine.

“Watch out!” yelled a stone man.

The winds were coming and everything started to move.

“And now! I am going to control the world!” yelled Sandor.

“Cut off his left arm!” yelled Mary.

But it seemed too late. Sandor was laughing. It seemed like he had done his work. The darkness was coming . No one could see anything…

 

 Chapter 6

It seemed like the end of the world. Sandor pulled out his sword and walked to Elisabeth.

“And now the human beings are going to end!” he yelled.

“YOU-ARE-WRONG!” yelled William. He ran to Sandor in the darkness.

“AWWWW!” yelled Sandor. William hit him and made him paralyzed.

Suddenly, the darkness was gone. William saw a girl standing in front of him. Sandor’s arm was cut by Elisabeth. But Sandor did not die.

The ground started to move. The land got a big gap and the bangle fell into the gap. Sandor picked up his stone and disappeared.

“Sandor didn’t die,” said Mary, “he was just badly injured by us.”

“But how can he leave the bangle and get his body?” asked Edwards.

“It’s the stone,” said Elisabeth, “I wanted to hit the stone after I cut off Sandor’s arm but he pushed me and so I can’t do it.”

“That means him…” asked William.

“He can live without the bangle.” said Elisabeth.

“But how…” said Mary.

“She’s it!” yelled a man riding on a unicorn.

“Did we come late?” asked another man.

“I think so,” said the first man, “Sandor might run away.”

“Who are you?” asked William.

“They are the Unicorn’s Knight!” yelled Elisabeth.

“And you might be Elisabeth,” said a Unicorn’s Knight, “We have two letters for you.”

“Look,” said another Knight.

 

Dear My Queen,

The orcs are coming to attack us. But don’t worry. I have a plan. I know that you are making an army, so I write to Iliam and ask him how you can win.

Iliam told me that he has a plan and also he has written a letter to you. He sends 5000 elfs to help me.

Ludis Dormer

 

“What!” yelled Elisabeth, “the orcs are attacking Sidem?”

“Read the next letter,” said the Knight.

 

To Queen Elisabeth,

I have heard about the things happen in Sidem. Don’t worry, I send 5000 elfs to fight. I know that you have met Sandor and so I let the Unicorn’s Knight to send you this letter. I found why Sandor didn’t die when you cut his bangle off. Remember the Braun Stone, it was made from gold. It was made of Twoploo. Twoploo was a kind of gold. Sandor melts the gold which was picking in the Mount of Demon in the Volcano of Death. He mixed the lava and gold and made a kind of stone called Wapiluka. He used the Wapiluka to mix with the melted diamond and silver and made the Braun Stone. The stone can make armies of orcs and also evil powers. Sandor used the stone to be his greatest treasure. He will not die if the stone is not destroyed. But I have found something: he made a rope of gold, if the stone is destroyed and he is killed by someone, the rope will disappear. And it saves the power of evil. Sandor can live in the rope. The rope will be a mystery. I will tell you the plan. Go and destroy Demon’s Cove and find the Braun Stone. You also need to rescue Titan.

Iliam

“Ok, I bet it’s time to attack Demon’s Cove,” said William.

“But how many armies do we have?” asked Mary.

“It’s now about 15000,” said Edwards.

“That’s it,” said Elisabeth, “go to Demon’s Cove!”

 

Chapter 7

It was in Minadusidy. Human beings were ready to fight with orcs.

“How many orcs do they have?” asked Ludis to a minister.

“About 50000,” said the minister.

“Then how many soldiers do we have?” asked Ludis.

“About 1500. If the elfs come, it will be 6500.”

“It’s so weak,” said Ludis, “we need to call Romantia and Lopudish for help.”

“Ouch,” an old minister came in, “we can also call Kasting and Frolimlods.”

“And Madianu and Vierk!” yelled another minister.

“Ok,” said Ludis, “push the bell for help!”

 “DONG, DONG!”

“What is that sound?” asked Mary.

“It’s the bell of Sidem!” yelled Elisabeth, “Sidem is calling for help!”

“Look,” yelled Edwards, “a giant bird is flying to you, Elisabeth!”

WHOOOSE! The bird threw a letter to Elisabeth. Elisabeth picked the letter up.

 

To Elisabeth,

I know that you will win but you need to light the fire on the Castle of Demon, so the orcs will leave Minadusidy.

Iliam

 

“Ok,” said William, “it is a great plan.”

 The orcs were coming to Minadusidy.

“Give them some rocks!” yelled an orcs.

The rocks came and hit Minadusidy. The city was crashing and everyone hid into the mountain.

“Give them more rocks!” yelled the orcs.

More rocks hit Minadusidy. Ludis was worried.

“The Kastings should come in 10 hours, but we can’t see them!” he yelled to a soldier who was holding a telescope, “can you see them?”

“I can see some fires burning in the east,” said the soldier.

“That means Sandor knew we are calling for help and told the orcs to stop us!” shouted Ludis, “look, the elfs are coming!”

“I can see Iliam!” yelled the soldier, “he comes!”

“How come they are so fast?” asked Ludis.

“They have got unicorns!” yelled the soldier, “AWWW!” He was hit by a golden arrow.

“More orcs are coming!”