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Topic：Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society? （20130921）

题目翻译：纵观整个历史，人们都梦想能生活在一个完美的社会里，但就何为理想社会人们的看法却不尽一致。你认为对于一个完美社会而言最重要的因素是什么？人们如何才能实现这样的理想社会？

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范文1：谈论实现理想社会的一个条件+如何实现理想社会

http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_a69410b70101deic.html

The human being’s pursuit of an ideal society has been going on for centuries（背景引入）, yet there has not been a definite answer to what a perfect society would be like and correspondingly the ways to achieve this dream society varied considerably according to different people.（全文观点及下文内容提示）

People can offer various definitions to a perfect society due to their different education background and life conditions. （本段观点）The lower class might claim that a society where giant gap between the rich and the poor vanishes and material wealth is not only abundant but also affordable for them is a good one. （解释1）The middle class believes that in an ideal society they should pay less tax and enjoy more benefits like free and elite education for their children. （解释2）The democrats tend to think that an upright government without corruption and abuse of power is a guarantee to an organised society.（解释3）Environmental advocates hold that besides the rapid growth of economy a balanced ecological system and a harmonious relationship between nature and human beings are also essential for an admired society. （解释4）For those intellectuals who have being devoting their life to building a better life for all human beings with their wisdom, free speech, respect to difference in personality and individual creativity, fair environment for individual’s self-fulfillment are symbols of a dream society.（解释5）

To achieve these goals often needs efforts from all members of the society. （本段观点）Ordinary citizens, though their share to the social wealth as a whole might be subtle in terms of individual contribution, are never insignificant and should be considered indispensable for constructing a better society.（解释1）For example, teachers can impart both knowledge and ways of thinking and learning to our decedents. （举例）Scientists and engineers can invent and develop more technologies and devices to help accelerate economic development and make our life more convenient. （解释2）Besides, politicians and civil servants who constitute the body of government are supposed to lead a more efficient and justified social system that promises public security and adequate access to individual’s rights.（解释3）

From my point of view, a perfect society may have numerous characteristics yet the most critical element must be a fair and honest government that works for its people and an efficient social system. And the accomplishment of such an ideal society certainly calls for multiple efforts from each and every member. （总结上文，突出自己的偏好）（385 words）

范文2：谈论实现理想社会的一个条件+如何实现理想社会

http://hz.xdf.cn/huodong/201309/228059358.html

It is true that the human race has built up the idea of creating a harmonious and wonderful world, such as Utopia.（背景引入）This is not unrealistic, and I tend to believe that people should give priority to the encouragement and promotion of the sense of safety and security in order to achieve this goal.（全文观点）

I think to realize the dream of an ideal society, the sense of safety and security must be developed among individuals.（本段观点）If people feel unsafe in society, they would probably become unsatisfied with the reality, and thus leading to negative impacts on the development of a perfect world. （解释1）The society would benefit greatly from promoting this sense, because it would be more likely for people to achieve their self-actualization, which is essential in developing a perfect world in modern times. （解释2）Without the promotion of sense of safety and security, the task of building the best community would be impossible. （结论）

For the sake of the dream of this wonderful society, feasible measures must be taken.（本段观点）Firstly, people must be aware of the fact that this would be an arduous and long-term task, and therefore we should make great efforts to contribute to the society.（解释1）Secondly, it is imperative for the government to assume the responsibility of improving the healthcare system, pension system and education. （解释2）The reason lies in the fact that a person who has accessed higher education would be more likely to fight for the development of the society provided that the healthcare and pension systems are available and reasonable.（对解释2的进一步解释）

In conclusion, I do believe that the sense of safety and security is of great significance in achieving an ideal world, and both governments and individuals should make efforts to make the dream come true.（总结全文各段观点）（289 words）

范文3：谈论理想社会的条件http://ielts-simon.com/ielts-help-and-english-pr/2014/01/ielts-writing-task-2-perfect-society-question.html

Over centuries, human being has been searching for achieving perfection, although it would be uneasy to reach this dream, people are still hoping to live in a such circumstances. In my opinion there are uncountable elements which could lead to ideal society. （全文观点）Therefore I am going to summarize them and what should be done to fulfill the dream. （下文结构预示）

One of the main leading points is preserving human rights.（本段观点）These are many such as fair chance of education, employment and health services, so that everybody will feel secured an satisfied, and this result in more loyalty towards the community.（具体解释）The way forward is raising the infrastructure of health system, making the education compulsory as well as feasible to access by the public and the government’s investing more to provide more job opportunities. （进一步解释）Consequently, these measures collectively lead to achieve the satisfaction of living.（结论）

Another important factor is building up a generation that is fortified by moral values like, loving, helping, respecting, avoid cheating lying among community. （本段观点）If all these values had been implanted earlier, we would have shorten the way to make our dream comes true.（进一步解释）

Finally, safety and protection is what people always are looking for in their life because they would not have to worry about themselves, their relatives or their belongings. （本段观点）To acquire this environment, there should more laws that control and better crimes and prevent offender from threatening society safety.（给出做法）

To sum up, perfection is an aspect that needs a lot of changes and many factors are considered from respecting human rights, ensuring healthy generations are growing up and wrapping up people with safe, and unless some steps are held our dream will become out of reach.(（总结全文）（282 words）