致旅途中的女儿

                                    我唯一的女儿

                                    正悠长于悠长悠长的旅途

                                    不能追随咫尺

                                    却总想与你一道飞翔飞翔

                                    把对家的牵牵挂挂

                                    化作每一次壮丽的喷薄 

                                    我不会辜负你殷殷切切

                                    绽放的每一朵芬芳

                                    酸酸涩涩的我  不是

                                    酸酸涩涩的你  不是

                                    酸酸涩涩的我  不是

                                    你永远强大的  后方

                                    倜倜傥傥的你  才是

                                    倜倜傥傥的我  才是

                                    倜倜傥傥的你  才是

                                    我永远冀望的  前方

诗人冢上春花评论：情思敏捷，语流清澈，表现细腻而流畅。