Girl 1: She was so dirty.

  Girl 2: She didn't have a doll to play with.

  Mulan:Hello Tweet,hello Twister,have some corn.

  Mulan's mother and father wan't she be more like a lady.

  Mulan's mother:Mulan,were are you?

  Mulan:Hi,mother I am hiding in this tree.

  one day, there was a fight in China,in which many peoples died.Mulan was worried about her father,he is old,she wasn't wan't he to dide.

  one night,Mulan cut her hair.Now she look like a boy.she went her father and said,“Father,I will go to fight.“Her father agreed,and Mulan left the town the next day.

  Mulan fight very well,and Mulan save China!

 红色是老师帮我修改的！