英文修改: 中文语言 Chinese Language
Source: Zhihu
(prepared by: alexcwlin; edited by: Adam Lam)

a.  prepared by alexcwlin; edited by: Adam Lam

b.  original by Little Flower

a.  (1) Chinese is (2) the most used native language  in the world.
b.  (1) Chinese language is (2) the most used as the native language  in th e world.

a.  Comparing with the west, an (3) apparent difference is the Chinese language (4) consists of characters instead of letters.
b.  comparing with the west, an (3) apparently difference is Chinese language (4) consisted by character instead letter.

a.  Chinese language is the oldest language in (5) the writing system that (6) is still being used in the contemporary world.
b.  Chinese language is the oldest language in (5) writing system that (6) still use in contemporary.

a.  In China, people from different places (7) may not know one another, but they can communicate (8) without difficulties because Chinese is pronounced the same in Mandarin across the country.
b.  In china. people come from different places (7) maybe can't understand each other, but they can communicate (8) without any difficulties  because  Chinese  character has same spell form.

a.  The Chinese language (9) plays a pivotal role in uniting the Chinese nation.
b.  Chinese language (9) a pivotal role in unite the Chinese nation.

a.  Nowadays, more and more people from other (10) countries start to learn the Chinese language as (11) the Chinese economy increases sharply and China’s global influence gets stronger.
b.  Nowadays, more and more people from other (10) counties also start learning Chinese language as (11) Chinese economic increasing sharply and global influential get stronger.

bold: cross-referencing on changes made

Selected items with explanations:

(1)        “Chinese” means “Chinese language” and therefore the word “language” is not necessary.

(2)        (Bad sentence).

(3)        The Noun “difference” should be modified by the Adjective “apparent” and not the Adverb “apparently.

(4)        This is a general discussion, and so Present Tense (“consists of” or “is consisted of”) should be used. “Consisted” is Past Tense and therefore is wrong.

(5)        “Writing system” is singular countable non-proper Noun and should be preceded by an Article “a/the” (such as “the writing system”).

(6)        Since the “use” is continuing at present, therefore Present Continuous Tense “is still being used” should be used.

(7)        Grammatically, use “each other” for 2 people only, but use “one another” for 3 or more people, which is the case here.

(8)        (Bad sentence).

(9)        Your sentence does not have a Verb, which is a “must” for a grammatically correct sentence. Adding “plays” would fix it.

(10)     Spelling mistake “country” and not “county”.

(11)     (Bad sentence).

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