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这个暑假懒牛妈把大牛娃放在学校的暑托班,本以为就是"吃喝玩乐",瞎玩高兴就好,没想到上个星期她还从学校里带回来一本颇为别致的故事书,名字叫"青蛙公主".这可不是一本普通的故事书,这是一本完全由学校的小朋友们原创,从题目到构思,从人物到情节,从绘画到语言,都是小朋友们群策群力的结果.先给大家介绍这本故事书,让大家看看幼儿园小朋友的"团体协作"的作品到底是个什么水平.
故事的题目叫"Frog Princess", 青蛙公主。封面上写这本故事书是由Ms.Brittany 和 Ms. Keri班级的小朋友编写并配图.
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Once upon a time there lived a beautiful princess named Rella. (很久以前,有一个美丽的公主叫Rella.)
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Rella lived in
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She went to Castle's dancing class every Friday.
(她每个星期五去城堡的舞蹈课学跳舞。)
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One day while dancing in class, an evil witch used her magic wand and turned Princess Rella into a frog. (有一天,她正在上舞蹈课,一个坏巫婆用她的魔棍把Rella公主变成了一只青蛙。)
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The evil witch said,"Ahhaha!" and
left.
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The whole kingdom was sad.
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The king and queen used the castle telephone to call each person in
the kingdom, but no one could help Princess Rella.
(国王和王后给王国里的每个人打电话寻求帮助,可是没有人可以帮助Rella 公主。)
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They went to the outskirts of the kingdom in search of help. (他们只能去城外去寻求帮助。)
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When they got there, they found no other than the evil witch
herself. (当他们到那里的时候,他们正好碰到那个坏巫婆.)
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"Why did you turn Princess Rella into a frog?" the king and queen
asked."Can you please turn her back?"
(“你为什么把Rella公主变成青蛙?”,国王和王后问道,“请你把她再变回来吧!”
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"No!" said the witch. "I will turn You into frogs!" she pointed
her wand and said :"Bitter, Batter, Bog, turn them into a frog on a
log!"
(“不!”坏巫婆说,“我还要把你们也变成青蛙!”她对着她的魔棍说道:“苦苦苦,打打打,把他们都变成木头上的青蛙!”
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What the witch didn't know was she had accidentally pointed the
wand at herself.
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She turned into a frog on a log.(她自己变成了木头上的青蛙了.)
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The king and queen picked up the wand and went
home.
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They pointed the wand at Rella and said "Bitter, Batter, Bella, turn her back into Princess Rella!" (他们一边把魔棍指向Rella,一边说:苦苦苦,打打打,把她变回成公主Rella!"
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Rella turned back into a princess and they lived "hoppily" ever
after. (Rella马上就变成了公主。从此他们“蹦蹦跳跳"得高兴地住在了一起.
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故事完毕。
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看到这里,大家是不是对小朋友的大智慧刮目相看呢?虽说是经常听到的公主巫婆的故事,可是里面穿插现代版的"儿童舞蹈课",电话寻求帮助,最令人想不到的就是那个巫婆"多行不义必自毙”的下场,太绝了.再从绘画上看,因为是每个小朋友画一张插图,所以人物形象不够统一,但是每幅画各有千秋,和内容非常贴切,或写意,或白描,用栩栩如生来描述一点也不过分呢.
那么,这么有趣生动的故事书具体是如何创作出来的呢?根据老师给家长发的一周上课总结的电子邮件中介绍,这是他们的一个"Shared Writing Project"-共同写作项目。先由一个年龄小一些的班级想题目,人物,和设置故事要解决的问题,给故事搭好主要结构.然后由Maggie班级小朋友负责解决这个故事中的问题,进行语言组织,老师负责把连贯的故事打印出来,然后每个小朋友配一幅图,最后装订成书.
以前在美国读书的时候就觉得美国同学非常喜欢一起做项目,然后分工负责明确,合作关系很融洽。原来是人家从小就开始有这样的活动来培养合作意识,学习如何进行团体协作,人家强调的是”集体作战“的精神,而不是谁是第一,谁是第二.这是不是我们国内的教育应该学习的地方啊?

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