书面表达如何增添语言内蕴的复杂句式

1. 句子形式多样化：根据表达的需求, 可以采用多种句式, 这样既能恰当表达, 又能避免形式单一

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1）The stones were so heavy that we couldn’t lift them at first.  (so. . . that. . . 句型)

2）There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption.  (同位语从句)

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3）In recent years, more and more people start to protect our environment, which makes our environment more and more beautiful.

→In recent years, with more and more people starting to protect our environment, our environment is becoming more and more beautiful. (with复合结构) 

→Nowadays, there are so many people who start to protect our environment that our environment is becoming more and more beautiful. (there be 句式) 

4）If you study hard, you will make rapid progress.

→Study hard and you will make rapid progress. (并列句) 

2. 使用非谓语动词形式, 句子凝练高端

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1）After learning it,  I’ m sure I’ll have a better understanding of the differences and similarities between Chinese culture and Western culture.

2）On arriving at the tea house,  the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups.

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3）She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (非谓语动词)

→She walked out of the lab, followed by many students.  

4）They sang and laughed as they went back to school. (非谓语动词)

→They went back to school, singing and laughing.  

3. 运用定语从句, 增加细节, 填补内容

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1）Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.

2）I am eager to invite you to join our team for the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make acquaintance with more friends with the same interest.

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3）You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class(使你容易通过这门课).  

4）Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture(从中你对中国文化会有更清晰的认识).  

5）I have found a flat for you on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese school. It is on the third floor with three rooms, one of which is bedroom(其中一个是卧室), and the other two are bathroom and kitchen.  

4. 巧用倒装, 增强句子的表现力

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1）Not only will our club’s works be displayed,  but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field.

2）Not only did you help improve my English,  but you also gave me more confidence in learning.  

3）Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.

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4）Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (倒装)

→Weak as/though I am, I’ll make the effort.  

5）He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (倒装)

→No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.  

5. 恰当使用强调句, 增强说服力

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1）It is you who taught me how to learn English well.

2）It was on Friday that our activity began.

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3）He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (强调句)

→It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.  

4）It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient.  

6. 自如应用各种名词性从句, 精彩纷呈

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1)If you are interested in what I have stated above, sign up on our school website before September 1st.

2)That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.

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3)To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (主语从句)

→What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.  

4)I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon(我那天下午得参加一个重要会议).  

7. with or without精彩点缀, 妙不可言

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1)Moreover, with the stadium set up,  a wide range of sports events are able to be held,  of which ping-pong,  football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity.

2)Without any hesitation,  we began to work.

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3)As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim(没有清晰可达到的目标) is like sailing without a compass.  

4)I can’t thank you enough for your generous help, without which I couldn’t have made such great progress(没有这些帮助我不能获得这么大的进步).  

8. 巧用副词, 充分表情达意

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1)I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you.

2)I genuinely hope that you can squeeze some time for our festival and have fun with us.

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3)She patiently(仔细地) explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow them.

4)We were perfectly(完全地) satisfied with the result of the experiment.

9. 语气委婉而中肯, 易于接受

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1)If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.

2)I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.

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3)I wonder if you could tell me(你能否告诉我) what books I need to read and the requirements of my homework.  

4)What do you think of it? Are you satisfied with it? If not, please tell me as quickly as possible(请尽快告诉我).