林翁老师与搏友们用打油诗接龙的形式相互交流，接龙藏尾，妙语连珠，笔下生花，文采飞扬。细细品读我感觉，接的是诗句，玩的是品味，志趣高雅，快乐无限。特别是林翁老师知识渊博，思维敏捷，才思横溢，令人叹服。

    我在品读林翁老师搏文《打油诗接龙—与林翁互动之二（卜算子）后,跃跃若试，有心学习一下。习练中，老师不摆架子，平等交流，悉心指教，指导我在字、词、句上精心推敲、选用，且亲手帮助修改，让我从原来不懂、不会到有那么一点点领悟，至少是从兴趣上的提高来说。在这里，我真诚地向人正品位高、令我敬重的林翁老师说一声：“谢谢您”！   

 

    习作如下，望品阅指点：

 

                    
                 林翁老师接搏友《yzy感悟》：成就也斐然

 

                                   成就也斐然

                            好评赢赞叹

                            知错就改从头越

                            攻坚排万难

                            去掉恶习气

                            改变旧理念

                            先进榜样为标杆

                            挺胸永向前。

 

                      
                   金华（接林翁老师：挺胸永向前）

                          

                           挺胸永向前

                           搏友接着连

                           学生不懂诗格律

                           老师莫心嫌

                           真情诗意浓

                           教诲记心间

                           日积月累财富厚

                           气壮贯长天

 

                     
                          林翁老师回接

 

                           气壮贯长天

                           堪称英雄汉

                           打油不讲平和仄

                           好友别自谦

                           坦诚交流好

                           开心雅趣添

                           你来我去互唱和

                           玩乐在博园

 

                    
                             金华回接

                           

                           玩乐在博园

                           搏友自耕田

                           辛勤耕耘禾苗壮

                           兴趣日日添

                           搏览长见识

                           朋友银线牵

                           老师榜样做在前

                           礼让敬在先

 

                    
                           林翁老师回接

 

                           礼让敬在先  

                           心诚不食言  

                           网海相识靠缘分

                           银屏情谊连  

                           友好常来往  

                           诗文键盘传

                           彼此学习共提高  

                           写出美佳篇

 

                    
                             金华回接

 

                           写出美佳篇

                           搏园百花鲜

                           诗文精彩功夫到

                           字字细细惦

                           学生初尝试

                           助阵兴不减

                           真心真意真努力

                           勤奋把笔练

 

                    
                            林翁老师回接

 

                            勤奋把笔练

                            刻苦深专研 

                            诗词曲赋都涉猎

                            攻坚不畏难 

                            句句细推敲

                            首首改数遍

                            精神可贵实难得

                            众友多赞言

 

                    
                              金华回接

 

                            众友多赞言

                            荣誉担在肩

                            份份耕耘有收获

                            辛劳换今天

                            怡然亦自得 

                            刻苦不畏艰

                            人老心红壮志酬

                            一年胜一年

 

                    
                            林翁老师回接

 

                            一年胜一年

                            生活比蜜甜

                            精神旺盛身体好

                            网海行舟船

                            广交天下友

                            诗文刊博园

                            老有所乐不孤寂

                            颐养享悠闲

 

                    
                              金华回接

 

                            颐养享悠闲

                            众人皆不嫌

                            家庭和睦万事兴

                            快乐大无边

                            子孙围膝绕

                            幸福润心田

                            国家发展个人富

                            小康在眼前

 

                    
                            林翁老师回接

 

                            小康在眼前

                            梦想定实现

                            日子过得红似火

                            和睦又美满

                            尽享生活美

                            老幼笑开颜

                            吟诗作赋弘扬党

                            赞歌唱不完

 

                    
                              金华回接

 

                             赞歌唱不完

                             海蓝天更蓝

                             山笑水笑人也笑

                             佳绩成美谈

                             幸福靠双手

                             协力同心干

                             万众一心齐努力

                             江山代代传

 

                             
                            林翁老师回接

 

                            江山代代传

                            人民世世安

                            华夏子孙创伟业

                            一步一层天

                            科技攀高峰

                            经济大发展

                            祖国强盛城乡美

                            前景更灿烂

 

               

                              好友《你以键盘访问我》精彩诗评（一）

                                        

                                    奉和唱酬诗精彩，交流思想出境界。

                            汇集溪流成江河，字里行间情澎湃。

                            妙笔生花风雅颂，出口成章信手来。

                            风格千秋韵律同，古诗新韵展华彩。

 

                  好友《你以键盘访问我》精彩诗评（二）

                                         前景更灿烂

                                友谊重如山

                                高山流水觅知音

                                人远心不远

                                网内存知己

                                博涯近眼前

                                你以键盘访问我

                                接龙玩浪漫

                 
 

                     好友《赵太国的心迹》精彩诗评

                            前程更灿烂

                            圆梦举国欢

                            中华复兴巨龙腾

                            九州乐翻天

                            大树谁能撼

                            波涛岂可拦

                            崛起东方唱大风

                            凯歌天下传

               

 

                     

                    好友《紫轩绿萝花》精彩诗评

                                           (一)

                               接龙玩浪漫

                               朋友乐得欢

                               你来我往皆友谊

                               诗文智慧展

                               动手又动脑

                               思维不迟缓

                               退休生活也精彩

                               夕阳红灿灿

 

                                 （二）

                               高人来相聚，

                               诗文展智慧。

                               心情多愉悦，

                               博园赛诗会。

 

           

               

                 好友《云天别样秀》精彩诗评

                             

                              林翁老师八斗才

                              兴致勃发接龙来

                              好友赋诗同助兴

                              高人一筹展文采

 

                

 

                     林翁老师接博友《你以键盘访问我》

                              接龙玩浪漫

                              韵婉绕耳边

                              博园常年花绽放

                              银屏色彩鲜

                              四海广交友

                              五湖情相牵

                              你以键盘访问我

                              林翁喜心间

         

                       荷塘秋色接《你以键盘访问我》

                             接龙玩浪漫

                             心花笑开颜

                             茫茫人海知音觅

                             博海遨游欢

                             银屏近咫尺

                             金樽邀月嫣

                             荷塘秋色醉之韵

                             低吟浅唱赞

 

                      荷塘秋色接《赵太国的心迹》：

                             凯歌天下传

                             把酒临风赞

                             九州尽唱中国梦

                             五湖四海翻

                             世界人民羡

                             东方巨龙船

                             乘风破浪无阻挡

                             达胜利彼岸

 

                       荷塘秋色接《紫轩绿萝花》

                             博园赛诗会

                             精彩纷呈瑰

                             弘扬正能量

                             文人墨客醉

 

           

 

                      《赵太国的心迹》接荷塘秋色：

                             达胜利彼岸

                             把盏共欢颜

                             九霄五洋看东方

                             中华宏图展

                             再现大唐美

                             重驶郑和船

                             炎黄儿女济沧海

                             彩云飞新天