2016上海中考已经结束，今年的中考英语作文题—I'M READY，附上范文一篇。

5. Today, I want to say I'm ready to get on my way to my dream. 1. after the baptism of the Senior Entrance Exam, I know I am well-prepared  to set new goals in my study in a senior high school and improving my way of learning.

I am ready to be away from my parents in a boarding high school. It's necessary for me to learn to live on my own, 2.just as a young eagle tries to strech its own wings.

I am ready to make more new friends and meanwhile, share my news, problems and pains with my old buddies 

Anyway,3. after all the ups and downs, I will still be courageous towards the future. 4. I'd like to say "I am ready!" loudly and confidently  to every tommorrow.

作文五点分析:

1. after the baptism of...经过。。。的洗礼,起个粉墨登场的效果.

2.一眼就能识别的比喻句

3. 人生的跌宕起伏，用词要老练。

4. 首尾呼应，结尾有力。

5. 前三段使用排比开场, 渲染,渲染再渲染, 谁说作文不散文