看到2014年中考英语作文this time next year, 脑海中的第一反应是歌神张学友的那首歌曲旋律. 仔细想想,这是一篇看似很宽泛很好写,却其实很难在100字内包罗思想,属于 说难不难, 说易不易.

练手一篇,贻笑大方:

5. This time next year, I will be going on my way to my dream. 1. The joy of graduation from middle school washed away by time, I will be planning to set new goals in my study in a senior high school and improving my way of learning.

This time next year, I may be away from my parents in a boarding high school. It's necessary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some washing and cleaning by myself.

This time next year, I will have many new friends and 2.meanwhile, share my news, problems and pains with my old buddies.

Anyway,3. after all the ups and downs, I will still be courageous towards every tomorrow, 4.whether this time next year or forever.

作文四点分析:

1. 独立主格结构放在第一段,起个粉墨登场的效果.

2. 平时积累的副词可以代替冗长的介词短语

3. 这可是歌词原文, 可不可以算个引用?~哈

4. whether引导的让步状语从句, 增加长句气势,收尾积极向上

5. 前三段使用排比开场, 渲染,渲染再渲染, 谁说作文不散文~