2015闵行一模作文：

l  题目：

Write at least 60 words on the topic “Learning to be polite”.以“学会礼貌”为题，写一篇不少于60词的文章，标点符号不占格。

（短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

提示：某英语报社正在举办“学会礼貌”的征文活动，请你以“学会礼貌”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，谈谈你对礼貌的理解；请列举至少三个不礼貌的行为，并谈谈怎样才能成为有礼貌的人。

The following are for reference: 以下词组仅供参考

laugh at, make noise, smoke in public, give a seat to…, keep quiet, be friendly (helpful/…)

l  推荐结构：

开头。--- 讨论不礼貌行为1长句/2短句。--- 过渡1句。--- 提出建议2-3条。--- 结尾。

l  推荐可用词句：

Ø  开头：

1.       Being polite is very important in our daily life.

2.       There is no doubt that it’s important for us to become polite people.

3.       Nowadays, politeness has become more and more important in our daily life.

4.       Nowadays, politeness plays an important role in our daily life.

5.       Politeness plays an increasingly important part in the modern society.

Ø  讨论不礼貌行为：

1.       Some people laugh at others when they meet with troubles. Others may make noise or smoke in public.

2.       Impolite behaviours include laughing at others, making noise as well as smoking in public.

3.       Impolite behaviours such as smoking in public and littering make others feel uncomfortable.

Ø  过渡句：

1.       As middle school students, we should/ ought to learn to be polite in our daily life.

2.       Here are some tips that we can do to become more polite people.

Ø  提出建议：

1.       For example/instance, we should never take the ‘special’ seats that are reserved for those in need on buses or undergrounds.

2.       For one thing, we can give our own seats to people in need on the bus. For another, ……

3.       Always remember to keep quiet/silent in libraries/ in class/ when teachers are talking.

4.       We should never interrupt others when they are talking.

5.       A smile always makes people happy and comfortable.

6.       We may offer a hand/ give a helping hand when someone needs help.

7.       We should think more of others/take others’ interests into consideration so that we won’t behave too selfishly.

Ø  结尾：

1.       To conclude, we should never ignore (忽略) the importance of learning to be polite.

2.       In conclusion, I sincerely suggest that everyone should make every effort to behave politely so that our world will become better.

3.       To sum up, learning to be polite should be made our top priority because it makes our life colourful and meaningful.

4.       All in all, / In a (short) word, ……