9B周练2作文

Growing up with good books

提炼出3个问题：(1) What are good books in your eyes?  (2) What advantages can we get from reading them?  (3) Show us your own understanding and experience of reading good books.

评分标准：

1.         内容8分：Q1得2分，Q2得2分(必须写出2个以上优势，写出一个得1分)，Q3写到自己经历的得2分，文章架构得1分(开头+结尾+过渡+逻辑词)，详略得当得1分。3个问题的顺序可打乱，也可把自己经历混入好处中(Q2-3结合)

2.         内容8分：语法词汇一处扣0.5分，句子结构错误一处扣1分。扣完为止。

3.         文采4分：前文得14分，文采得0-1分；前文得15分，文采得0-2分；前文得16分，文采得0-4分。

结构：

开头1句。------Q1(1句) ------ Q2 (分开写2个好处，每个好处至少1句长句，有逻辑词连接) ------ Q3 (写2句左右) --- 结尾

(Q2和Q3可调换位置或结合)

好词句：

1.         In my opinion, books play an essential role/ an increasingly important role in teenagers’ lives.

2.         For the time being, an increasing number/a growing number of people are becoming aware that it’s necessary for teenagers to read good books not only in class but also after school or at weekends.

3.         In my eyes, good books are educational ones that have a positive influence on readers.

From my perspective(在我看来), a good book is a book that opens my eyes and encourages me to work hard.

4.         An(other) obvious/apparent advantage of reading books is that……

5.         ADVANTAGES:

enrich our knowledge

broaden our mind

relax myself/make me relaxed/make me less stressed/reduce my pressure (减压)

help teenagers develop good personalities

learn about different cultures of different countries

learn about lives of famous people and their ways to success

gradually (渐渐) improve our reading and writing skills

For example/instance, you can imagine yourself being a character in a novel and experiencing a different life from yours.

Good books teach us a lot of moral lessons that are really good for our mental growth/development/health.

Reading good books takes me to another wonderful world, where we can learn new things that we can’t get from text books.

see the world through the writer’s eyes/ from a different perspective

6.         结尾：Doubtlessly, reading a lot of good books makes our lives more interesting and more colourful.

Once we develop/form a habit of reading, we will have a brighter future.

7.         逻辑词(好处是并列的，可用并列结构)：for one thing, for another

8.         升华：I’ve learnt from books that virtues never grow old and I’m supposed to have a positive attitude towards life and study.

9.         Reading good books leads you to knowledge, wisdom and success.

…. is the road to ….

10.     经历：I found it helpful to read books/ I started reading my first book at the age of 10.

For me, I am used to reading ……

When I was young, ……

Let me take myself as an example, …….

例文：(根据朱则然作文改写, 作文特点：结构较清晰)

There is no denying that good books will have a great effect/influence on a person’s life. In my opinion, good books are books which not only broaden my mind, but also tell me the moral values of the life. Due to this, we can get a lot of advantages from reading them. First, we can learn a lot of knowledge we can’t get in class. Furthermore, we may learn about various moral values which make us become more inspiring people. Last but not least, we can “experience” hundreds of terrific adventures when reading adventure stories. For me, I read a number of books at weekends with great pleasure. In conclusion, good books can change one’s life. It’s helpful for us to read more.