古华:《芙蓉镇》 选译
(2014-02-28 21:39:51)
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按:出于兴趣,随性翻译了一下下面这段文字,文笔轻快活泼,诙谐幽默。其中A版本是杨宪益先生翻译的,B是本人的拙译,其中不少地方参考了杨译,如:“青石板”、“几十”等。红色字体是我认为翻译的难点。由于能力有限,欢迎各位批评指正!
原文:芙蓉镇街面不大。十几家铺子、几十户住家紧紧夹着一条青石板街。铺子和铺子是那样的挤密,以至一家煮狗肉,满街闻香气;以至谁家娃儿跌跤碰脱牙、打了碗,街坊邻里心里都有数;以至妹娃家的私房话、年轻夫妇的打情骂俏,都常常被隔壁邻居听了去,传为一镇的秘闻趣事,笑料谈资。
A:The main street of Hibiscus was not big. Paved with flagstones it was wedged between a dozen shops and a few scores of houses. These buildings were so packed together that if one shop stewed dogmeat, the aroma filled the whole street; if some child fell and knocked out a tooth or smashed a bowl, the whole street knew of it; neighbors often overheard the secrets girls confided to each other and the jokes between young married couples, then regaled the whole town with these titbits.
B:The flagstone
street of Fu Rong Town was not that wide. It was heavily lined with
a dozen stores and several scores of houses. They were so
physically close to each other that the smell of stewed dogmeat by
one family would waft across the street; that neighbors knew the
kid who