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2012年1月14日雅思写作真题解析(含原创高分范文)

(2012-01-14 22:49:42)
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【Task 1】Table桌面图
The table gives information about the percentages for the populations aged 60 and over in Africa,Europe,North America,South America, Oceania and Asia in two separate years: 2000 and 2050.
n(如下是部分考生回忆的数据,明显不完整!遗漏要点只因他们不知道考点在哪儿)
n1, Europe: 24-36%
n2, North America:  21-34%
n3, Oceania: 18-30%
n4, Asia: 14-28%
n5, Latin America: 10-25%
n6, Africa: 6-18%

实际上,图表应该是这样的:
The proportion of old people aged 60 and over

 

2000
2050
Europe
24%
36%
North America
21%
28%
Oceania
12%
24 %
Asia
14 %
24 %
Latin America
10 %
20 %
Africa
6 %
18 %
Total
10%
24%
本次考试的统计学图表的绘制综合了剑桥雅思题库中三个图表的内容,熟悉真题的同学不会感到很陌生;由我主编的最新雅思写作教程收录了这三个图表,在课堂上环球雅思广州学校的各位写作教师对这三个图表做过详细的讲解。

【图表一】
考题内容与剑桥雅思第五册的一篇图表作文相似,用词造句方面可以参考这篇作文的满分范文。

The graph shows the increase in the ageing population in Japan, Sweden and the USA. It indicates that the percentage of elderly people in all three countries is expected to increase to almost 25% of the respective populations by the year 2040.

 

In 1940 the proportion of people aged 65 or more stood at only 5% in Japan, approximately 7% in Sweden and 9% in the US. However, while the figures for the Western countries grew to about 15% in around 1990, the figure for Japan dipped to only 2.5% for much of this period, before rising to almost 5% again at the present time.

 

In spite of some fluctuation in the expected percentages, the proportion of older people will probably continue to increase in the next two decades in the three countries. A more dramatic rise is predicted between 2030 and 2040 in Japan, by which time it is thought that the proportion of elderly people will be similar in the three countries.



【图表二】
本次考试的统计图表看起来想这个图表

【图表三】但是主要特征的寻找方法和对比方法却与如下这个图表一致:



【Task 2】议论文,工作类

Academic, 2012Jan 14th

Some employers are given increased importance to social skills in addition to good qualifications. Do you agree or disagree that social skills are as important as good qualifications for success in jobs?

【高分范文】按照大部分同学的思维惯性,我们采用了“起、承、转、合”的写法。

Overall, I agree with this statement. Employers giving increased importance to social skills may have come to the recognition that it is hard to underestimate the contribution of good social skills on a wide variety of businesses.


It is not uncommon that people would rather work with someone who is likable but incompetent than with someone who is skilled but obnoxious. This has great influence on employers when looking for their employees. We can see this clearly from our own experiences that social skills matter today more than ever before and this is especially true for people who want to break into a popular field like entertainment, for example, the only way to differentiate them from others is to be more likable.


However, some people might argue that many occupations do not involve much social interaction, but they fail to realize that many fields used to be havens for loners, like programming, increasingly require exceptional people skills. In fact, how we value competence changes depending on whether we like someone or not and people who lack social competence end up looking like they lack other competencies, too.


Therefore, individuals should attach correspondingly greater importance to the acquisition of these skills for the sake of their career development, though this might be difficult to be accepted by those who are exceptionally qualified for certain jobs but not likable.


In conclusion, without suggesting that social skills are of equal importance to good qualifications for success in every job, I think all job seekers should be equipped with more social skills which can be achieved through patenting, schooling and training. (267 words)

 

【特别提醒】

学术性雅思考试的学术性在写作任务中体现的最明显:学术写作在遣词造句、答题内容和逻辑的组织方面要求都比较严格。对于那些可以接受写作成绩在6分以下的烤鸭来说,可以不用掌握复杂的逻辑组织方式,比如,反证法。这些考生主要努力的方向应该是:保证不跑题不偏题,使用正确的句型,尽可能做到观点清晰、前后一致、有理有据,尽可能完成写作任务!

 

对于那些志在获得高分的考生来说,遣词造句的重要性应该是退居次席的。这些人需要学会使用比较学术的方法分析理由、给出证据。推荐这些同学这些论证方法:

 

追溯原因(分析某种观点的主要理由或者观点形成的可能过程)

驳(寻找漏洞,进行攻击)

反证法(假设某个观点正确——推出前后矛盾的结论)

设(根据需要选择是否使用虚拟语气)



【补充阅读】

 

我们不需要知道这些也可以写出不错的雅思作文,但是需要考生具备一定的概括能力。这种能力主要是靠平时积累形成的。

 

 

Good social skills are critical to successful functioning in life. These skills enable us to know what to say, how to make good choices, and how to behave in diverse situations.

 

Types of Social Skills

1. Survival skills (e.g., listening, following directions, ignoring distractions, using nice or brave talk, rewarding yourself)

2. Interpersonal skills (e.g., sharing, asking for permission, joining an activity, waiting your turn)

3. Problem-solving skills (e.g., asking for help, apologizing, accepting consequences, deciding what to do)

4. Conflict resolution skills (e.g., dealing with teasing, losing, accusations, being left out, peer pressure)

 

Good job qualifications

1. Experience (see B1 below);

2. Strong written and verbal communication and interpersonal skills;

3. Good organizational, time management, customer service and problem-solving skills;

4. Ability to work accurately, with interruptions, to meet deadlines;

5. Ability to work well independently and as part of a team;

6. Ability to exercise flexibility, initiative, good judgment and discretion



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