[转载]2020年7月天津高考英语书面表达解析

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(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等);
(2)对活动的感受;
(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
成人礼 the coming-of-age ceremony
新冠脑炎 COVID-19
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Jin
[审题]Dear Chris,
I'm glad to hear from you. Now I would like to tell you something about the coming-of-age ceremony held in my school on June 8.
At today's ceremony we watched a video where we saw the graduates from our school played an active part in fighting against the COVID-19. Besides, we also recalled how we have grown up to be what we are today, for which we owe much gratitude to both teachers and parents. The ceremony did give us the feeling that we are no longer the children relying on adults for everything. We are grownups now who bear the responsibility of making our country stronger. With this mission in my mind, I'm determined to work harder as a university student so that I will be more prepared to make contributions for my country.(129)
Yours,
Li Jin
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