剑6 T3 小、大作文（Same or different?）_雯雯

The first diagram shows that there are four main stages in the life of the silkworm. First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again.

The cocoons are the raw material used for the production of silk cloth. Once selected they are boiled in water and the threads can be separated in the unwinding stage. Each thread is between 300 and 900 meters long, which means they can be twisted together, dyed and then used to produce cloth in the weaving stage.

Overall, the diagrams show that the cocoon stage of the silkworm can be used to produce silk cloth through a very simple process.

你想吓唬雅思考生，很简单，只需要轻轻的对他说：“这次将考流程图。”保证他晚上失眠，好不容易睡着也得做噩梦。流程图真的很难吗？不见得吧，流程图主要考察的是将图中的内容用文字有逻辑的串起来，你一直要翻开任何一篇流程图的范文，然后在文中将图中的文字说明标出来，然后就能很清晰的看出作者是如何将这幅图转变成文字的，学习的过程其实就是个模仿的过程，在文中标出流程图中的文字说明其实就是个很好的学习过程。

流程图简单在哪里？流程图不要像以前所谈的统计图表需要分析，简单明了，要求也很简单，把图上的文字用句子串起来，就可以了。但是难点还是一样，就是多样表达的问题。

题目

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 流程图说了两个事情the life cycle和the stages

第一段

The first diagram shows that there are four main stages in the life of the silkworm.

第一句话简单明快，点名了有四个过程，为第一个图的中心句，下面只需要把四个过程说清楚就行了。

First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves.

说明了第五个过程（从moth到eggs）和第一个过程（从eggs到larva），其实这个流程图的每个过程的只包括三个要素：原料，时间和产物

第五个过程：原料（moths）, 时间（未说明），产物（eggs）

第一个过程：原料（eggs, 注意），时间（take ten days），产物（become a silkworm larva）

This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself.

说明了第二和第三个过程，其实这只是一个过程，从silk larva到a cocoon of silk thread (原来图上标注的3,4是一码事啊，这个要没有背景知识还真不知道)，三要素

原料：the larva

时间：This stage lasts for up to six weeks (up to表示上限)

产物：a cocoon of silk thread around itself

After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again.

说明了第四个过程，从cocoons到moths，三要素

原料：these cocoons

时间：after a period of about three weeks (图上标注的是16 days)

产物：the adult moths

第二段

The cocoons are the raw material used for the production of silk cloth.

指出了cocoons和the production of silk cloth的关系, 说明了两个图的联系

Once selected they are boiled in water and the threads can be separated in the unwinding stage.

一句话把图中的select, boil和unwind的三个阶段都说到了

select: once selected

boil: they are boiled in water

unwind: the threads can be separated in the unwinding stage.

Each thread is between 300 and 900 meters long, which means they can be twisted together, dyed and then used to produce cloth in the weaving stage.

将twist和weave过程进行了说明

Twist: they can be twisted together

Weave: (they are) used to produce cloth in the weaving stage.

第三段

Overall, the diagrams show that the cocoon stage of the silkworm can be used to produce silk cloth through a very simple process.

Overall点出了第二个图的主题，为第二个图的中心句

词汇句型积累

表示一段时间：

It takes ten years for each egg to become…

This stage lasts for up to six weeks until… 注意until其实就是before的近义词

After a period of about three weeks,

大作文：（剑6范文里只是篇4分作文）

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both hese views and give your opinion.

In recent 10 years, more and more Chinese people have enough finance to support them to travel abroad. And there is a question caused naturally: Whether we should behave like native people? Some people say we should follow the local customs and behaviour. Other people disagree with them. Admittedly, both sides of view have reasonable points to convince tourists.

The ones who advocate learn to behave like local people give their reasons as follows. People often say "When in Rome, do as Romans do." Tourists as foreigners should respect native cultures. According to their thoughts, Patterning local costom can decrease the risk of causing conficts. On the other hands, learning native behaviour is a good opportunity to have a view at a new kind of culture. If you still touch the society like what you do in your homeland, it will be pity that you never join in the local environment.

On the contrary, the other side of coin voice the opposite sound. The major point is we should realise cultural diversity is an important elements in modern world. The nation who refuse different costum is not open enough to face international environment. Some people think there will not be single culture in future, however, each culture will contain many foreign elements. Only a culture is willing to absorb others advantages, can it develops fast and becomes more tremendous. The most convincing example is when 19 century, Chinese ruler did not see the open world clearly, they closed Chinese eye and never no how other culture developed. So few years later, China became a impoverished and closed country. If Chinese keep open 100 years ago, there must be much more positive points in our culture.

For my part, I am for the later view. The acception of different costums and behaviour is a way to learn outside of nation. What's more, welcoming other cultures is a method to make native culture splendid.

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