问题解决型

2011年6月The Certificate Craze

1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试

2.其目的各不相同

3.我的看法

 

总体框架：

首段——提出问题

中间段——原因分析          

结尾段——解决方案

 

 

原因分析：

好事（CET4 1990.6城市绿化问题）----分析绿化的好处（清洁空气，美化环境）

坏事（CET4 2012.6商品过度包装）-----1分析过度包装的成因（利益驱使）

& 2 分析过度包装之危害（浪费资源）

 

 

首段：提出问题

第一部分：引出话题

第二部分：细节描述

 

 

 

（首段）第一部分：引出话题

1-5以客观问题为视角；6-8以主观的人为视角

1, …成为热门话题

版本一：Recently， XXX has become a hot topic /problem/ issue (among people.)

【凑字数版】Nowadays, with the development of the society/ modern industry， XXX has become a hot topic among people.

4，….在生活中扮演一个重要角色，但也带来了严重问题。

…… has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

5，….见诸报端，引发热议【其后加句子】

Recently，it often hits headlines of newspapers that…,which has aroused heated discussion among the public.



（首段）第二部分：细节描述

三种方法：事实描述法、举例描述法、调查法

 

1事实描述法：

核心句型：

An increasing number of individuals/ A great many people find it ______ to _______ .

Eg: An increasing number of individuals find it difficult to give up smoking.

 

2举例描述法

核心句型：

 “Taking a look around, one can find numerous examples with ease：+例子（1-3个）”

 

2012.6 (坏事)Excessive Packaging

Taking a look around，we can find examples with ease/easily：a small computer is packed in a thick and heavy carton（硬纸盒），clothes are putted in a well-designed plastic bags and moon-cakes are usually placed in delicate boxes.

 

2011.6考证热

Taking a look around, one can find numerous examples with ease： a common case in point is that students spend a great deal of time and energy attending various kinds of certificate-oriented training courses to ensure a better score.

 

 

Eg: A typical example of this is my father, who has smoked for 20 years and haven't given up smoking. /he is a heavy smoker.

Eg: A typical example of this is my uncle, who has bought 5 private cars.

 

3调查法

核心句型：

According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。

 

 

 

 

2011年6月The Certificate Craze 

首段：

Recently，it often hits headlines of newspapers that a growing number of people are enthusiastic about pursuing various kinds of certificates, which has aroused heated discussion among the public. Taking a look around, one can find numerous examples with ease. A common case in point is that students spend a great deal of time and energy attending various kinds of certificate-oriented training courses to ensure a better score.

 

 

中间段：分析问题

主旨句+原因（危害）1+原因（危害）2

 

 

原因分析句型4:

很多因素可以解释这个现象，如下几点是最重要的

A number of factors can account for such phenomenon, but the followings might be the critical ones. Firstly，原因一. Secondly, 理由二.

 

危害分析句型1：

如果我们熟视无睹，这个问题必定会带来严重的后果

The problem mentioned above is bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye to it. first and foremost，危害一. Moreover, 危害二.

 

 

2011年6月The Certificate Craze 

中间段：

A number of factors can account for such phenomenon, but the followings might be the critical ones. 【The purpose of acquiring certificates varies from individuals to individuals. 】Firstly，as the job market competition is becoming increasingly fierce, not only can a certain certificate prove their capabilities, but also will put them in a favorable position in the employment market . Secondly, when it comes to white-collared workers, more job-related certificates often guarantee greater opportunities for salary raise and promotion. Lastly, it is also an ideal way to enhance their job techniques and sharpen their competitiveness.

 

 

 

 

末段：解决问题

第一部分：主旨句

第二部分：建议措施

第三部分：总结、展望

 

第一部分：主旨句

写法一：

Obviously/ From my perspective, it is imperative that effective and efficient actions should be taken to prevent the above situation.

 

 

 

第二部分：建议措施

第一：因此，我们应该吸取好的一面，而回避坏的一面。（取其精华，去其糟粕）

We should，therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet(方面).

或：We should，therefore，As the common saying goes, “take the essence, discard the dregs.”

 

第二：我们应该发扬长处，并将其坏处减少到最低程度。

What we must do is to encourage the strength and diminish the weaknesses to the least extent.

 

第三：政府制定法律法规

It is essential that laws and regulations should be worked out and enforced to …

 

Eg: It is essential that laws and regulations should be worked out and enforced to ban/reduce smoking. /Put an end to the trend/ situation.

 

 

第四：个人应该提高意识

The public（we ourselves）should enhance the consciousness of the importance of …

 

注意：of后填名词如：Health / education / independence等。

 

用逻辑词将措施连起来。

1 on the one hand, on the other hand

2 In the first place, In the second place

2 to begin with, in addition, finally

 

第三部分：总结、展望

第一种写法：

With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the problem will be solved in the near future.

 

第二种写法：

Only with these measures taken can we…

Eg: Only with these measures taken can we expect a comprehensive（综合的，广泛的） development of college students.

 

第三种写法：

Only in this way can we …

Eg: Only in this way can we make the society more harmonious.

 

2011年6月The Certificate Craze 

结尾段：

From my perspective, it is imperative that effective and efficient actions should be taken to prevent the above situation. In the first place, we should，as the common saying goes, “take the essence, discard the dregs.” In the second place, the public should enhance the consciousness of the importance of one’s comprehensive abilities, for the simple reason that it is the practical skills, such as management, cooperation, communication, rather than certificates that guarantee one’s accomplishment in career.  Only in this way can we realize our dreams.

 

 

 

真题练习：

2011年6月The Certificate Craze

1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试

2.其目的各不相同

3.我的看法

Recently，it often hits headlines of newspapers that a growing number of people are enthusiastic about pursuing various kinds of certificates, which has aroused heated discussion among the public. Taking a look around, one can find numerous examples with ease. A common case in point is that students spend a great deal of time and energy attending various kinds of certificate-oriented training courses to ensure a better score.

A number of factors can account for such phenomenon, but the followings might be the critical ones. 【The purpose of acquiring certificates varies from individuals to individuals. 】Firstly，as the job market competition is becoming increasingly fierce, not only can a certain certificate prove their capabilities, but also will put them in a favorable position in the employment market . Secondly, when it comes to white-collared workers, more job-related certificates often guarantee greater opportunities for salary raise and promotion. Lastly, it is also an ideal way to enhance their job techniques and sharpen their competitiveness.

From my perspective, it is imperative that effective and efficient actions should be taken to prevent the above situation. In the first place, we should，as the common saying goes, “take the essence, discard the dregs.” In the second place, the public should enhance the consciousness of the importance of one’s comprehensive abilities, for the simple reason that it is the practical skills, such as management, cooperation, communication, rather than certificates that guarantee one’s accomplishment in career.  Only in this way can we realize our dreams.